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Good morning, Erine! Apparently, your cold seemed worse. There is a saying in Korea that if you take a pill when you have a cold, you will recover from the cold in 7 days. However, if you take enough rest, you will recover from the cold in a week. Yes, what you think is right! No matter how good the medicine you took is, taking enough rest is a good remedy for all colds. There is nothing better than taking a good rest in this case. I hope you can get a tight sleep and relax yourself today. Take care and see you! *Essay Some people go right on to college after high school; others take a year or more off to work or travel. Which do you think is the better choice? If I am in that situation, I will choose traveling. In my case, I have never thought about traveling when I was younger. The main reason was a lack of money. By that time, I was low on cash so I couldn't dream to take a trip. However, I think that I should have gone around the world when I was younger. Now, even if I have funds to travel, it is very hard for me to make time to put it in action. I should have made time for travel when I was in university. I am so regretful when I think of it. If someone is considering what is better between going right on to college and travel, I will recommend the person to go on a trip without hesitation. A good lesson from trip is extremely precious, incomparable to knowledge from school.

Good morning, too, [이름]!^^ Thank you for your concern. I really appreciate it!^^ However, the problem is you know my schedule and I just can\'t rest well due to my load of work. Anyhow, I am trying my best to grab all opportunities to make my body stay stronger. I eat a lot of healthy food so I think I can compromise!^^ See you~~ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Erine! >> CorrectApparently, your cold seemed worse. >> CorrectThere is a saying in Korea that if you take a pill when you have a cold, you will recover from the cold in 7 days. >> CorrectHowever, if you take enough rest, you will recover from the cold in a week. >> Correct Yes, what you think is right! >> CorrectNo matter how good the medicine you took is, taking enough rest is a good remedy for all colds. >> Correct (I was also a bit surprised with your sentences. kkk)There is nothing better than taking a good rest in this case. >> CorrectI hope you can get a tight sleep and relax yourself today. >> CorrectTake care and see you! >> Correct*Essay Some people go right on to college after high school; others take a year or more off to work or travel. Which do you think is the better choice? If I am in that situation, I will choose traveling. >> If I were in that situation, I would choose traveling. (More on the past when it comes to this kind of situations because it indicates less possibilities of happening)In my case, I have never thought about traveling when I was younger. >> In my case, I never thought about traveling when I was younger. (Past Tense) The main reason was a lack of money. >> The main reason was lack of money. (Article usage)By that time, I was low on cash so I couldn\'t dream to take a trip. >> CorrectHowever, I think that I should have gone around the world when I was younger. >> CorrectNow, even if I have funds to travel, it is very hard for me to make time to put it in action. >> CorrectI should have made time for travel when I was in university. >> I should have made time for traveling when I was in university. (Preposition + noun[gerund]) I am so regretful when I think of it. >> Correct or I feel regretful when I think of it.If someone is considering what is better between going right on to college and travel, I will recommend the person to go on a trip without hesitation. >> CorrectA good lesson from trip is extremely precious, incomparable to knowledge from school. >> A good lesson from a trip is extremely precious and incomparable to the knowledge we get from school. (The use of conjunction in two statements.)