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Good morning, Erine! I am happy for hearing your normal voice, not low voice. Today, we talked about the sea weed and [이름] and I'd like to explain them more to you. In advance, [이름] is called laver and it is totally different with the sea weed. Sea weed has a long, thick and sticky body but laver looks more on hair. We mainly eat sea weed as a form of soup when we celebrate our birthday. Laver is a kind of side dishes and we eat it after roasting with some salt and sesame oil. They are all nutritious so many people nearly enjoy them at every meal. When it comes to sea weed, it is really good for women especially who delivered a child. Sea weed contains a lot of iodine so it can help to compensate women for lack of iodine right after having a baby. Because of that reason, here in Korea, eating sea weed soup after having a baby is an unwritten rule. It is a high nutritionally balanced food so I'd like to recommend it to you to try it. I remember that you like eating beef. Luckily, we normally put some beef into the sea weed soup to make it taste better. Well, I am salivating and starving because of my imagination. I need to get some coffee to comfort my stomach. That is all for today and see you! ^^

Hello, [이름]!^^ Thank you so much for enlightening me about the differences of [이름] and sea weed!^^ I must admit that you were able to explain it very well that I was convinced to try the sea weed soup right away!^^ The main problem is I just don\'t know where I can find it. kkk Thank you once again!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Erine! >> CorrectI am happy for hearing your normal voice, not low voice. >> I am happy to hear your normal voice and not the low voice. Today, we talked about the sea weed and [이름] and I\'d like to explain them more to you. >> Today, we talked about the seaweed and [이름] and I\'d like to explain about them more to you. (preposition)In advance, [이름] is called laver and it is totally different with the sea weed. >> Correct.Sea weed has a long, thick and sticky body but laver looks more on hair. >> Sea weed has a long, thick and sticky body but laver looks like more of a hair. (sentence pattern: looks like)We mainly eat sea weed as a form of soup when we celebrate our birthday. >> CorrectLaver is a kind of side dishes and we eat it after roasting with some salt and sesame oil. >> Laver is a kind of a side dish and we eat it after roasting it with some salt and sesame oil. (Articles and pronouns.)They are all nutritious so many people nearly enjoy them at every meal. >> CorrectWhen it comes to sea weed, it is really good for women especially who delivered a child. >> Correct or>> Women who just gave birth.Sea weed contains a lot of iodine so it can help to compensate women for lack of iodine right after having a baby. >> Sea weed contains a lot of iodine so it can help to compensate the lack of iodine of women right after having a baby. (Sentence pattern) Because of that reason, here in Korea, eating sea weed soup after having a baby is an unwritten rule. >> CorrectIt is a high nutritionally balanced food so I\'d like to recommend it to you to try it. >> CorrectI remember that you like eating beef. >> CorrectLuckily, we normally put some beef into the sea weed soup to make it taste better. >> CorrectWell, I am salivating and starving because of my imagination. >> CorrectI need to get some coffee to comfort my stomach. >>CorrectThat is all for today and see you! ^^ >>Correct