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A happy Friday to you, Erine! It is rainy and cold so I turned on my stove. The central heating system in my company's building will be turned on at the end of this month so I have to rely on my stove until then. I really hate this cold weather and I hope I live in a warm country. ^^;; By the way, I remember that you will go to your hometown this Sunday morning. I just hope you won't get tired because of a long journey. Having a safe trip and good bonding time with your family. See you on Monday! *Essay Nowadays, the private life of a politician is hardly private. In your opinion, should we be so concerned with the private affairs of a politician or political candidate? In my opinion, we should be concerned with the private affaires of them. They are the people who represent the will of the citizens so they should be honest and incorrupt. However, nowadays, because of putting importance on respecting other people's privacy, many of politicians dislike being disclosed to the public. I think this kind of social mode will lead to some side effects such as corruption and immorality. Another problem is that people are not interested with their private affaires and lazy to monitor them. If we ignore what is happening in our political filed, our country will not have a bright future. People have a right and obligation to judge and reprimand them. As a member of the public, I am ashamed of myself for neglecting to pay attention to what is happing.

Hello there, [이름]!^^ I am really grateful because you really know the details that I have been telling you.&^^ Thank you so much for being a nice student!^^ I will definitely have fun and you should have, as well. Take care!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ A happy Friday to you, Erine! >> CorrectIt is rainy and cold so I turned on my stove. >> CorrectThe central heating system in my company\'s building will be turned on at the end of this month so I have to rely on my stove until then. >> Correct I really hate this cold weather and I hope I live in a warm country. ^^;; >> Correct By the way, I remember that you will go to your hometown this Sunday morning. >> Correct I just hope you won\'t get tired because of a long journey. >> Correct Having a safe trip and good bonding time with your family. >> Correct See you on Monday! >> Correct  *Essay Nowadays, the private life of a politician is hardly private. In your opinion, should we be so concerned with the private affairs of a politician or political candidate? In my opinion, we should be concerned with the private affaires of them. >> In my opinion, we should be concerned with their private affairs.(Spelling)They are the people who represent the will of the citizens so they should be honest and incorrupt. >> Correct However, nowadays, because of putting importance on respecting other people\'s privacy, many of politicians dislike being disclosed to the public. >> Correct I think this kind of social mode will lead to some side effects such as corruption and immorality. >> Correct Another problem is that people are not interested with their private affaires and lazy to monitor them. >> Another problem is that people are not interested with their private affairs and are lazy to monitor them. (Spelling)If we ignore what is happening in our political filed, our country will not have a bright future. >> If we ignore what is happening in our political field, our country will not have a bright future.People have a right and obligation to judge and reprimand them. >> People have the right and obligation to judge and reprimand them. (The use of articles.)As a member of the public, I am ashamed of myself for neglecting to pay attention to what is happing. >> As a citizen, I am ashamed of myself for neglecting to pay attention to what is happening. (Use of vocabulary and spelling.)