Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
A happy Tuesday to you, Erine!
First of all, it is very nice of you to celebrate my birthday.
You were the second person who celebrated it until now.
The first one was my boyfriend and he made a bowl of seaweed soup this morning.
However, you were the first one who sang a birthday song for me. ^^
I was so touched.
The sad thing is that I am a year older today and it is an undesirable reality. ^^;;
Well, I suddenly think that I need to get an anti-aging eye cream for me. Hahaha!
By the way, through our class today, I knew more about you and thought again that we have a lot of similarities in outlook.
I haven't told you about me until now because of my low skill in speaking English.
I will keep on trying to be talkative nonstop.
By the way, I have one question about your practice and custom there.
According to your statement in our class, annulment and divorce is not the same.
If someone filed for an annulment and the annulment took effect, is there a chance for him or her to have a new partner in the future?
And then, in this case, if the person really wants to marry someone, are they allowed to get married?
I'd like to say thank you for giving me a chance to know about your culture.
Learning new culture is a very exciting and enjoyable thing. ^^
That is all for today and have a nice day! ^^
See you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!^^
Happy birthday again!
I have always been thankful for having you in my class. Even though you got a year older again,
think that you are a blessing to somebody!^^
Regarding your concern, maybe we can talk about more of it when we have a class. I also need to
make a research about the topic since I don\'t have any experience about it. kkk
Take care of yourself and I hope that this day will be a blast!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
A happy Tuesday to you, Erine!
>> Correct First of all, it is very nice of you to celebrate my birthday.
>> Correct You were the second person who celebrated it until now.
>> Correct The first one was my boyfriend and he made a bowl of seaweed soup this morning. >> Correct
However, you were the first one who sang a birthday song for me. ^^
>> Correct I was so touched.
>> Correct The sad thing is that I am a year older today and it is an undesirable reality. ^^;;
>> Correct Well, I suddenly think that I need to get an anti-aging eye cream for me. Hahaha!
>> Correct By the way, through our class today, I knew more about you and thought again that we have a lot of similarities in outlook.
>> By the way, through our class today, I knew/had known more about you and thought again that we have a lot of similarities about our outlook.I haven\'t told you about me until now because of my low skill in speaking English.
>> I haven\'t told you about myself until now because of my low level of skill in speaking English.I will keep on trying to be talkative nonstop.
>> Correct By the way, I have one question about your practice and custom there.
>> Correct According to your statement in our class, annulment and divorce is not the same.
>> According to your statement in our class, annulment and divorce are not the same.If someone filed for an annulment and the annulment took effect, is there a chance for him or her to have a new partner in the future?
>> Correct (Yes, it is possible to have a new partner. Most celebrities have done it.)
And then, in this case, if the person really wants to marry someone, are they allowed to get married?
>> Correct (Yes, they are allowed.)I\'d like to say thank you for giving me a chance to know about your culture.
>> CorrectLearning new culture is a very exciting and enjoyable thing. ^^
>> CorrectThat is all for today and have a nice day! ^^
>> CorrectSee you!
>> Correct
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