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Good morning, Teacher Erine! As an extension of our class, I'd like to explain more about Chinses cultures to you. I went there in my 22 years old and it was my first time to go abroad. As soon as I got to the airport in Beijing, the first impression was not that good. First, air condition was bad and smoke pollution was a little bit serious. I even could smell something terrible. Moreover, I could see trash everywhere so felt that Chinese people don't give importance on the public health. Of course, current Beijing is not like that, even it is changed to the most advanced city. Second, Chinese people's personality is very slow. For example, I visited a bank and post office and I needed to deal with my business very urgently. However, staff there were not prompt in action. Now I come to think of it, they were a little bit slow in doing something just in comparison to Korean. In other words, Korean's personality is so hot tempered. ^^;; Finally, they really give importance on a relationship between people. It is called 'GUANXI' in Chinese and it is considered as the most important factor in dealing with a business related to public service. It means that there is nothing that we can't handle as long as we have a good relationship with top officials. However, I think it is a matter of degree so I had better not have a prejudice on that. ^^ Anyway, that is all for today and have a nice day! See you! ^^

Hi there, [이름]!^^ This composition is really informative that I have known more about the Chinese culture. I had some ideas about their culture. I hope you can tell me more since you have got an experience dealing with them already. Take care, [이름]!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher Erine! >> CorrectAs an extension of our class, I\'d like to explain more about Chinses cultures to you. >> As an extension of our class, I\'d like to explain more about Chinese culture to you. (Spelling.)I went there in my 22 years old and it was my first time to go abroad. >> I went there when I was 22 years old/I went there at 22 and it was my first time to go abroad.As soon as I got to the airport in Beijing, the first impression was not that good. >> Correct First, air condition was bad and smoke pollution was a little bit serious. >> First, the condition of the air was a little bit serious because of the pollution. (Let\'s avoid repetition.)I even could smell something terrible. >> I could even smell something terrible. (Even is used between two verbs.)Moreover, I could see trash everywhere so felt that Chinese people don\'t give importance on the public health. >> Moreover, I could see trash everywhere so felt that Chinese people don\'t give importance to the public health. (give importance to...)Of course, current Beijing is not like that, even it is changed to the most advanced city. >> Of course, currently, Beijing is not like that because it is changed to the most advanced city. (Did I get the idea right?)Second, Chinese people\'s personality is very slow. >> CorrectFor example, I visited a bank and post office and I needed to deal with my business very urgently. >> CorrectHowever, staff there were not prompt in action. >> However, the staff there were not prompt in action. (Article usage)Now I come to think of it, they were a little bit slow in doing something just in comparison to Korean. >> CorrectIn other words, Korean\'s personality is so hot tempered. ^^;; >> CorrectFinally, they really give importance on a relationship between people. >> Finally they really give importance to their relationship among people. (Between is used for two nouns and among is for a higher number of nouns)It is called \'GUANXI\' in Chinese and it is considered as the most important factor in dealing with a business related to public service. >> It is called \'GUANXI\' in Chinese and it is considered as the most important factor in dealing with a businesses to public service.(business related then noun) It means that there is nothing that we can\'t handle as long as we have a good relationship with top officials. >> CorrectHowever, I think it is a matter of degree so I had better not have a prejudice on that. ^^ >>  CorrectAnyway, that is all for today and have a nice day! >> CorrectSee you! ^^ >> Correct