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Good day, Erine! I remember that you usually have a Thursday sickness, are you okay today? ^^;; I feel also a little bit tired and somehow want to sleep more. I think a day's felling is really related to the weather. Now, it is cloudy and cold so it seems to make me feel gloomy. Well, the main reason why I feel like this is probably from my tasks that I must finish until this week. I hope I can greet this coming weekend with joy without any worries about my work. I also hope you can have a nice day without a Thursday sickness. ^^ See you tomorrow! *Essay Many science fiction stories deal with the possibility of being able to "design" our children by choosing the specific physical and personality traits we would like them to have. Do you think this is a good idea? I totally disagree with this idea and it is a terrible thinking. All people want their children to have a good physical and personality traits. Let's say we are given a chance to choose a good physical condition for our children and there are five stages, of course the fifth stage is the highest level. Who will not choose the fifth stage? What I want to say is a very simple logic. I don't want to make our children to be a monotonous person like a robot. Human beings always find happiness in challenges against hardship and grow more. If we can control ourselves by an artificial method, we had better make robots and train them.

Hello, [이름]!^^ You really remember that I have a Thursday sickness!^^ But you are more in a crucial state. Because you can\'t control the weather unlike for me, I can control my status.^^ I hope that you can finish all your tasks today!^^ See you then!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good day, Erine! >> Correct I remember that you usually have a Thursday sickness, are you okay today? ^^;; >> CorrectI feel also a little bit tired and somehow want to sleep more. >> CorrectI think a day\'s felling is really related to the weather. >> CorrectNow, it is cloudy and cold so it seems to make me feel gloomy. >> Correct Well, the main reason why I feel like this is probably from my tasks that I must finish until this week. >> Well, the main reason why I feel like this is probably because of my tasks that I must finish until this week.I hope I can greet this coming weekend with joy without any worries about my work. >> CorrectI also hope you can have a nice day without a Thursday sickness. ^^ >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> Correct*Essay Many science fiction stories deal with the possibility of being able to \"design\" our children by choosing the specific physical and personality traits we would like them to have.Do you think this is a good idea? I totally disagree with this idea and it is a terrible thinking. >> I totally disagree with this idea and it is a terrible way of thinking. (Expressions)All people want their children to have a good physical and personality traits. >> All people want their children to have good physical and personality traits. (article usage.)Let\'s say we are given a chance to choose a good physical condition for our children and there are five stages, of course the fifth stage is the highest level. >> CorrectWho will not choose the fifth stage? >> CorrectWhat I want to say is a very simple logic. >> CorrectI don\'t want to make our children to be a monotonous person like a robot. >> CorrectHuman beings always find happiness in challenges against hardship and grow more. >> CorrectIf we can control ourselves by an artificial method, we had better make robots and train them. >> If we can control ourselves through an artificial method, we had better make robots and train them.