Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
A happy Friday to you, Erine!
Today, we talked about the weather there and here and I gave you a small tip in keeping warm.
I researched the reason why wearing many thin clothes will be more helpful than a layer of thick clothing in keeping out the cold.
When we wear many layers of thin clothes, air-layer will be made between a body skin and clothing.
We usually call it 'Standstill Air-layer' and it will function to prevent the heat and the moisture between layers from being radiated.
It means that the more thin clothes we wear, the more air-layers we can get and keep for a long time.
Moreover, according to the change of the weather condition, we can put off or on our clothing easily.
It is a kind of scientific logic so if we follow it well, we can get through winter warmly.
Through today's research, I also learned about the logic that I didn't know before in detail.
There is one more tip about keeping warm.
You should make your neck and shoulder keep warm because a cold will go in your body through the two parts.
It may be nothing but small things always lead to big things.
Anyway, wish you to have a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^
강사 첨삭
[이름],
All I can say is you have been very helpful!^^
I am so pleased to know this information and I can\'t contain my feelings.
It just made my day!^^
Now, I know what to do when I feel cold.
This is what I call, \"learning\".
Thank you teacher!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
A happy Friday to you, Erine!
>> CorrectToday, we talked about the weather there and here and I gave you a small tip in keeping warm.
>> Today, we talked about the weather here and there and I gave you a small tip about keeping yourself warm. (Preposition usage and expression here and there)I researched the reason why wearing many thin clothes will be more helpful than a layer of thick clothing in keeping out the cold.
>> Correct When we wear many layers of thin clothes, air-layer will be made between a body skin and clothing.
>> Correct We usually call it \'Standstill Air-layer\' and it will function to prevent the heat and the moisture between layers from being radiated.
>> CorrectIt means that the more thin clothes we wear, the more air-layers we can get and keep for a long time.
>> Correct Moreover, according to the change of the weather condition, we can put off or on our clothing easily.
>> Correct It is a kind of scientific logic so if we follow it well, we can get through winter warmly.
>> Correct Through today\'s research, I also learned about the logic that I didn\'t know before in detail.
>> Correct There is one more tip about keeping warm.
>> Correct You should make your neck and shoulder keep warm because a cold will go in your body through the two parts.
>> Correct It may be nothing but small things always lead to big things.
>> Correct Anyway, wish you to have a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^
>> Correct
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