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Good morning, Teacher! It is very cold today here in Korea and just stopped raining. We don't usually experience frequent rain in this season but this year, I have encountered many times of rain. When I left home, it was raining and my hands were freezing because I needed to hold my umbrella. The weather forecast said that the temperature will reach negative 4 degrees Celsius at the end of this week. I really hate this kind of cold. ^^;; By the way, yesterday, I went to the park riding a bicycle with my boyfriend. I have not gotten used to this new place so I needed to go around more. It seems like riding a bicycle to hang around is very useful for me. Just months ago, I was not good at riding it but now, I seem to have got trained more than ever. I can pass by with riding a bicycle even if there are many people. According to this experience, I felt again that people should learn this kind of thing at an early age. Anyway, I just feel that moving into this place was a good choice. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! P.S.: The homework you gave was done on the 5th of November. ^^;;

Happy Monday once again, [이름]!^^ Oh yeah, thank you for reminding me about the homework I told you. As I mentioned, your teacher is getting older.kkk Keep warm my dear and don\'t let your immune system be weak for  you not to have cough and colds, which are easily acquired during cold days. See you tomorrow!! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectIt is very cold today here in Korea and just stopped raining. >> Correct or >> It is very cold today here in Korea and it has just stopped raining. (You can use the present perfect to mention new information.)We don\'t usually experience frequent rain in this season but this year, I have encountered many times of rain. >> We don\'t usually experience frequent rain in this season but this year, I have encountered rain many times. (Sentence structure.)When I left home, it was raining and my hands were freezing because I needed to hold my umbrella. >> CorrectThe weather forecast said that the temperature will reach negative 4 degrees Celsius at the end of this week. >> CorrectI really hate this kind of cold. ^^;; >> CorrectBy the way, yesterday, I went to the park riding a bicycle with my boyfriend. >> CorrectI have not gotten used to this new place so I needed to go around more. >> CorrectIt seems like riding a bicycle to hang around is very useful for me. >> CorrectJust months ago, I was not good at riding it but now, I seem to have got trained more than ever. >> CorrectI can pass by with riding a bicycle even if there are many people. >> I can pass by while riding a bicycle even if there are many people. (While can be used to emphasize two actions happening at the same time.)According to this experience, I felt again that people should learn this kind of thing at an early age. >> CorrectAnyway, I just feel that moving into this place was a good choice. >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> CorrectP.S.: The homework you gave was done on the 5th of November. ^^;; >> Correct