Composition

Good morning, Teacher! As I heard from the weather forecast, there is a possibility to snow tomorrow here. If it happens, it is the first snow this year. Actually, I don't like snowing but the first snow somehow seems to have a special meaning for everyone. I will let you know whether snow falls or not in our class tomorrow. By the way, I was amazed that you used to be a telemarketer before and I really admire you. I think it is the most difficult job and really mentally demanding. As I heard, dealing with strangers needs a lot of patience and it will cause telemarketers to get too much stress. We have done a research for which job is the hardest here in Korea and the first rank was being a telemarketer. The reason is because it is easy for them to get hurt by strangers' rudeness. People tend to mess with telemarketers and some people even do verbal abuse to them. They are the person who helps us deal with a pending issue and they are not the target that we can vent our angers. Anyway, I think being a teacher fits in with you. ^^ That is all for today and see you tomorrow! P.S.: The homework you give today was done on the 9th of Nov. ^^;;

Hello [이름]!^^

Thank you so much for telling me these things.

If I were there, the first snow would be very important for me, too!^^

I would not let that pass without me spending time with my special someone.kkk

Regarding my job before, it was hard but I learned a lot of things from that.

Maybe I can elaborate more about that tomorrow.

Take care!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

 

Good morning, Teacher!

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As I heard from the weather forecast, there is a possibility to snow tomorrow here.

>> As I heard from the weather forecast, there is a possibility to snow here tomorrow. (place then time)
If it happens, it is the first snow this year.

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Actually, I don\'t like snowing but the first snow somehow seems to have a special meaning for everyone.

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I will let you know whether snow falls or not in our class tomorrow.

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By the way, I was amazed that you used to be a telemarketer before and I really admire you.

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I think it is the most difficult job and really mentally demanding.

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As I heard, dealing with strangers needs a lot of patience and it will cause telemarketers to get too much stress.

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We have done a research for which job is the hardest here in Korea and the first rank was being a telemarketer.

>> We have done a research about which job is the hardest here in Korea and the first rank was being a telemarketer. (research about)
The reason is because it is easy for them to get hurt by strangers\' rudeness.

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People tend to mess with telemarketers and some people even do verbal abuse to them.

>> People tend to mess up with telemarketers and some people even do verbal abuse to them.
They are the person who helps us deal with a pending issue and they are not the target that we can vent our angers.

>> They are the people who help us deal with a pending issue and they are not the target to whom we can vent our anger.
Anyway, I think being a teacher fits in with you. ^^

>> Anyway, I think being a teacher fits you.
That is all for today and see you tomorrow!

>> Correct
P.S.: The homework you give today was done on the 9th of Nov. ^^;;

>> Correct (Thank you for telling me.)