Composition

Good morning, Teacher! Just like what you said, time flies so fast! Don't you have a Thursday sickness at this moment? By the way, here in Seoul, the temperature suddenly reached negative 2 degrees Celsius this morning so I went to work putting on a duck down jumper. At this moment, I envy you living in a warm place. You may say you also feel cold but the cold here is incomparable. By the way, I checked my formal class record in Dec 2014 and found that Power English had a 5days off including weekend. I hope you will be able to pursue your plan before ending this year. See you! *Essay Many schools employ security guards and have installed security equipment such as video cameras and metal detectors in the building. In your opinion, how should security in public schools be handled? In my opinion, setting security equipment such as CCTV is very useful. These days, there are many unwanted things happen in schools and the real situation is very serious. A total number of students who one teacher takes care of is about 30~40 here in Korea. In this case, a teacher is unable to look after and observe each student. To supplement this weakness and ensure students' safety, we need another option badly. CCTV is a good alternative and it will secure our children against unexpected incident. Some say CCTV can invade people's privacy so it should not be allowed to be installed in public places. Even if there are two opinions in installing CCTV, I am sure that the opposite side of the people also can't deny advantages in setting it. At this point, we should consider more about how we can use it wisely.

Cold morning to you, [이름]! Your temperature has been a big issue here in the office since most teachers are surprised with the sudden drop of it. We are all asking our students about it and I hope you can keep yourself warm. Thank you for asking me about my condition. Nevertheless, never worry because I can cope up with it!^^ I will see you tomorrow, Friday!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectJust like what you said, time flies so fast! >> CorrectDon\'t you have a Thursday sickness at this moment? >> Correct (I do..... Honestly.)By the way, here in Seoul, the temperature suddenly reached negative 2 degrees Celsius this morning so I went to work putting on a duck down jumper. >> By the way, here in Seoul, the temperature suddenly reached negative 2 degrees Celsius this morning so I went to work with my duck down jumper put on. (Putting on is considered as \"which I put on my duck down jumper\". It will give a different idea to your sentence.) You may say you also feel cold but the cold here is incomparable. >> CorrectBy the way, I checked my formal class record in Dec 2014 and found that Power English had a 5days off including weekend. >> Correct (Did you really do that?^^ You made me smile here.)I hope you will be able to pursue your plan before ending this year. >> Correct See you! *Essay Many schools employ security guards and have installed security equipment such as video cameras and metal detectors in the building. In your opinion, how should security in public schools be handled? In my opinion, setting security equipment such as CCTV is very useful. >> CorrectThese days, there are many unwanted things happen in schools and the real situation is very serious. >> These days, there are many unwanted happenings in schools and the real situation is very serious. (Or: unwanted things happening in schools)A total number of students who one teacher takes care of is about 30~40 here in Korea. >> CorrectIn this case, a teacher is unable to look after and observe each student. >> CorrectTo supplement this weakness and ensure students\' safety, we need another option badly. >> CorrectCCTV is a good alternative and it will secure our children against unexpected incident. >> CorrectSome say CCTV can invade people\'s privacy so it should not be allowed to be installed in public places. >> CorrectEven if there are two opinions in installing CCTV, I am sure that the opposite side of the people also can\'t deny advantages in setting it. >> Even if there are two opinions about installing CCTV, I am sure that the opposite side also can\'t deny advantages in setting it up. (Preposition usage)At this point, we should consider more about how we can use it wisely. >> Correct.