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2011-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good morning! We checked the list of Aprill 2011and Yellow mark is OK as seen below. But red mark is things that you have to check again. We didn't received and didn't up load invoices of 432.25EUR, 29,115.00EUR and 2962.08EUR in bellin for April and The invoice of 3,066.62EUR is excepted your list for April. I think invoices of 432.25EUR, 29,115.00EUR and 2962.08EUR is put in our list for May. So would you check the list again? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello Dear [Name]!

It is always nice to help you in composing your own letter. I am always here if you need anything.

T.Camille

Here are your corrections:

Good morning!
>>Correct!
We checked the list of Aprill 2011and Yellow mark is OK as seen below.
>>We checked the list of April 2011 and the Yellow marks are OK as listed below.
But red mark is things that you have to check again.
>>But the red marks are things that needs to be checked.
We didn't received and didn't up load invoices of 432.25EUR, 29,115.00EUR and 2962.08EUR in bellin for April and The invoice of 3,066.62EUR is excepted your list for April.
>>We didn't receive and didn't upload the invoices of 432.25 EUR, 29,115.00 EUR and 2,962.08 EUR in billing for April. The invoice of 3,066.62 EUR is eliminated from your list for April.
I think invoices of 432.25EUR, 29,115.00EUR and 2962.08EUR is put in our list for May.
>>I think the invoices of 432.25EUR, 29,115.00EUR and 2,962.08EUR are on our list for May.
So would you check the list again?
>>Correct!
I'm looking forward for your reply.
>>Correct!
Thank you.

>>Correct!

 

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