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A happy Friday to you, Teacher! Today, we had a free talk and I think it was an amazing time. I am always ready to listen to your stories and willing to share my stories with you. I just hope I didn't offend you by doing so. ^^;; Franking speaking, I am unqualified to give you a piece of advice because I haven't enjoyed my life to the fullest even if I am available now. The thing there is that I haven't found a real meaning in my life and I am not sure that I can find it out very soon. I always think that I should have done this and that but I still don't put my thinking in action because of the money problem. Today's me is made of my old habit so it seems like it is very hard for me to change myself. I confessed my thinking and current situation to you through this write and I don't owe you anything, do I? ^^ Anyway, wish you to have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! *Essay Many people immigrate to the United States because they believe that it is better than their native country. In fact, many people believe that the United States is the best country in the world. Do you agree? Why or why not? I don't agree with this opinion. First, prices in the United States are very expensive. It is hard for people to live there unless they have a huge amount of money. Second, security doesn't seem better than here. As the subject mentioned above, the United States is the best country in the world so in some ways, they can become a target to get attacked by the opposite group such as IS. In other words, they are not safe from a terrorism. Finally, there is much racial discrimination in the United States and it doesn't seem to be improved until now. In conclusion, preferring to live there is a kind of toadyism so we should not blindly follow the trend.

Happy Friday, [이름]!^^ It was a crazy morning for me and I apologize if I have influenced you in a bad way.However, I\'m confident that I made your day!^^ kkk Thank you so much for being open.^^ Enjoy your weekend!~~~~Teacher Erine~~ A happy Friday to you, Teacher! >> CorrectToday, we had a free talk and I think it was an amazing time. >> CorrectI am always ready to listen to your stories and willing to share my stories with you. >> CorrectI just hope I didn\'t offend you by doing so. ^^;; >> CorrectFranking speaking, I am unqualified to give you a piece of advice because I haven\'t enjoyed my life to the fullest even if I am available now. >> Frankly speaking, I am unqualified to give you a piece of advice because I haven\'t enjoyed my life to the fullest even if I am available now. (Spelling) The thing there is that I haven\'t found a real meaning in my life and I am not sure that I can find it out very soon. >> CorrectI always think that I should have done this and that but I still don\'t put my thinking in action because of the money problem. >> Correct Today\'s me is made of my old habit so it seems like it is very hard for me to change myself. >> Today\'s me is made from the old habits so it seems like it is very hard for me to change myself. I confessed my thinking and current situation to you through this write and I don\'t owe you anything, do I? ^^ >> I confessed my emotions and current situation to you through this composition and I don\'t owe you anything, do I? ^^ (No, you don\'t~)Anyway, wish you to have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! >> Anyway, wishing you a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday!*Essay Many people immigrate to the United States because they believe that it is better than their native country. In fact, many people believe that the United States is the best country in the world. Do you agree? Why or why not?I don\'t agree with this opinion. >> CorrectFirst, prices in the United States are very expensive. >> Correct It is hard for people to live there unless they have a huge amount of money. >> Correct Second, security doesn\'t seem better than here. >> Correct As the subject mentioned above, the United States is the best country in the world so in some ways, they can become a target to get attacked by the opposite group such as IS. >> Correct In other words, they are not safe from a terrorism. >> In other words, they are not safe from terrorism. (Article usage)Finally, there is much racial discrimination in the United States and it doesn\'t seem to be improved until now. >> CorrectIn conclusion, preferring to live there is a kind of toadyism so we should not blindly follow the trend. >> Correct