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2015-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! I'd like to ask you about the meaning of words in relation to our class today. You said when I say 'ensure' it seems like I give warranty to somebody or something. I checked it on my dictionary and found another word 'insure'. Are the two words the same? These words really make me confused. Please help me to make it clear. ^^;; By the way, I will tell you my plan for this coming weekend in advance. I will be asking for a leave from my work this Friday and go on a trip with my boyfriend. His company provides free condominium tickets for employees and he can use it for 3 days. We already used a day and two days is remaining. Before ending this year, we are forced to use that so we decided to travel this weekend. Moreover, my boyfriend's birthday is coming soon so I want to give good memories to him through this trip. However, the problem that I have is that my condition is still not good and it is possible for me to affect our trip. I don't like to see a doctor just because of my cold. I somehow think that if I take a pill whenever I get a cold I might develop resistance to the drug. You used to be a nurse before and I believe in that you can give an advice about that. Anyway, thanks for reading my long composition and have a nice day. See you! ^^ *Homework 1. This exercise is not very difficult. It's easier than I expected. 2. The weather is not good today. It's raining. I hope the weather will be better next week. 3. People are not very friendly in big cities. They are usually friendlier in small towns. 4. In the government of a country, the President is the most important person. 5. People say that Chinese is more difficult to learn than English.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!^^ This one is a bit long I can say. But it\'s fine!^^ I am delighted to know that you are going on a trip. But I am sad to tell you that the best way for you to be better is enough rest. So, maybe, you can ask for a leave on Thursday andFriday for you to rest on Thursday, for the WHOLE day!^^ I am serious. That way, I believe your condition will be a lot better before the trip. Drinking vitamins wouldn\'t be enough so please consider what I have given you. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectI\'d like to ask you about the meaning of words in relation to our class today. >> CorrectYou said when I say \'ensure\' it seems like I give warranty to somebody or something. >> CorrectI checked it on my dictionary and found another word \'insure\'. >> CorrectAre the two words the same? >> Correct (They are not the same. The word insure is used mostly in a financial context as it relates to insurance. Ensure usually means to make sure or to guarantee.)These words really make me confused. >> CorrectPlease help me to make it clear. ^^;; >> Correct By the way, I will tell you my plan for this coming weekend in advance. >> CorrectI will be asking for a leave from my work this Friday and go on a trip with my boyfriend. >> CorrectHis company provides free condominium tickets for employees and he can use it for 3 days. >> Correct We already used a day and two days is remaining. >> We already used a day and we still have two days remaining. (Sentence pattern)Before ending this year, we are forced to use that so we decided to travel this weekend. >> CorrectMoreover, my boyfriend\'s birthday is coming soon so I want to give good memories to him through this trip. >> Correct (Advance happy birthday!)However, the problem that I have is that my condition is still not good and it is possible for me to affect our trip. >> CorrectI don\'t like to see a doctor just because of my cold. >> CorrectI somehow think that if I take a pill whenever I get a cold I might develop resistance to the drug. >> I somehow think that if I take a pill whenever I get a cold, I might develop resistance to the drug. (Punctuation mark usage)You used to be a nurse before and I believe in that you can give an advice about that.  >> CorrectAnyway, thanks for reading my long composition and have a nice day. >> CorrectSee you! ^^ >> Correct*Homework 1. This exercise is not very difficult. It\'s easier than I expected. >> Correct2. The weather is not good today. It\'s raining. I hope the weather will be better next week. >> Correct3. People are not very friendly in big cities. They are usually friendlier in small towns.>> Correct 4. In the government of a country, the President is the most important person. >> Correct5. People say that Chinese is more difficult to learn than English. >> Correct

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