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2015-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Today, we talked about weight and metabolism and you looked like an expert. Indeed, you are qualified to give advice to people in relation to body. You feel dizzy today and I hope you can get over the terrible feeling soon. To lessen your work, I will finish my composition shortly. See you tomorrow and take care! *Homework 1) Where will you go if you can take a week's holiday? 2) If Julie had spoken better English, she would have found a better job. 3) If Paul's boss invites him to lunch, he will accept. 4) If I lose my wallet, I will report it to the police. 5) What would happen if you missed your flight?

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I apologize if I looked terrible a while ago. As much as I wanted to hide whatever I was feeling, your keen eyes failed me to do so. However, I want to thank you for understanding me. I also hope that you will have a better condition after meeting your doctor. Have a wonderful day.Take care! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectToday, we talked about weight and metabolism and you looked like an expert. >> CorrectIndeed, you are qualified to give advice to people in relation to body. >> CorrectYou feel dizzy today and I hope you can get over the terrible feeling soon. >> CorrectTo lessen your work, I will finish my composition shortly. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow and take care! >> Correct*Homework1) Where will you go if you can take a week\'s holiday?>> Correct2) If Julie had spoken better English, she would have found a better job. >> Correct 3) If Paul\'s boss invites him to lunch, he will accept. >> Correct 4) If I lose my wallet, I will report it to the police. >> Correct5) What would happen if you missed your flight? >> Correct

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