Composition

Good morning, Teacher! Here in Seoul, I am experiencing heavy snow and almost all things have been changed to white. It is beautiful but I feel somehow uncomfortable to walk. If snow covers the ground we will face some problems such as traffic congestion and slippery rods. I hope snow will melt away soon. By the way, as an extension our class today, I researched the reason why we should not eat apples when we get a cold. Experts say that apples help us hold our bodies' water but it will hinder a fever from being out of our bodies. If we don't radiate a fever outside a cold will last longer. I am sure that eating apples is a great precaution to prevent a cold but I don't recommend it to people after getting a cold. Just like what you prescribed, we would rather have citrus fruits such as oranges, lemons and citrons. Well, it is very interning when I share information with you. Anyway, I hope you can get over your Thursday sickness as well as your cough. See you tomorrow! ^^ *Essay Invent a New Holiday! I like this subject. What I want to invent as a new holiday is 'Pet Day'. Nowadays, many people raise pets but at the same time, many pets especially dogs is abandoned. When dots are young and cute people give a lot of love to them but as long as they get old and sick some people just throw them away like trash. It must be considered as a crime and people should realize the importance of pets' lives. It is really our time to invent 'Pet Day' as a new holiday.

Hello there, [이름]! I don\'t have this thing called \"Thursday sickness\" because my body condition got better when I woke up this morning!^^ But still, I appreciate your concern about my syndrome. I am more hoping that you may get a better condition, too. Thanks also for a very informative composition.!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> Correct Here in Seoul, I am experiencing heavy snow and almost all things have been changed to white. >> Correct  It is beautiful but I feel somehow uncomfortable to walk. >> Correct If snow covers the ground we will face some problems such as traffic congestion and slippery rods. >> If snow coverst the ground, we will face some problems such as traffic congestion and slippery roads.(Punctuation and spelling)I hope snow will melt away soon. >> Correct By the way, as an extension our class today, I researched the reason why we should not eat apples when we get a cold. >> By the way, as an extension of our class today, I researched the reason why we should not eat apples when we get a cold. (Preposition usage) Experts say that apples help us hold our bodies\' water but it will hinder a fever from being out of our bodies. >> Experts say that apples help us hold our bodies\' water but it will hinder fever from coming out of our bodies. (article usage and vocabulary)If we don\'t radiate a fever outside a cold will last longer. >> If we don\'t radiate fever outside, colds will last longer.I am sure that eating apples is a great precaution to prevent a cold but I don\'t recommend it to people after getting a cold. >> I am sure that eating apples is a great precaution to prevent colds but I wouldn\'t recommend it to people after getting a cold. Just like what you prescribed, we would rather have citrus fruits such as oranges, lemons and citrons. >> Correct Well, it is very interning when I share information with you. >> Well, it is very entertaining when I share information with you. (Did I get the right word?)Anyway, I hope you can get over your Thursday sickness as well as your cough. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! ^^ >> Correct *Essay Invent a New Holiday! I like this subject. >> Correct What I want to invent as a new holiday is \'Pet Day\'. >> Correct Nowadays, many people raise pets but at the same time, many pets especially dogs is abandoned. >>  Nowadays, many people raise pets but at the same time, many pets especially dogs are abandoned. (Subject verb agreement)When dots are young and cute people give a lot of love to them but as long as they get old and sick some people just throw them away like trash. >> When dogs are young and cute, people give a lot of love to them but as they get old and sick, some people just throw them away like trash. (spellin and puctuation mark.)It must be considered as a crime and people should realize the importance of pets\' lives. >> Correct It is really our time to invent \'Pet Day\' as a new holiday. >> Correct