Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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What learned in this program?
>> What I learned in this program
For my generation, learning a language is a tool for success such as getting a good job, entering a great university.
>> For my generation, learning a language is a tool for success such especially in getting a good job and entering a great university.
So, I’m familiar with only receptive skills like listening and reading.
>> Correct.
On the other hand, YL program made me realize that in order to acquire a language in the soundest way, there are 4 skills that teachers and learners have to focus on, namely, speaking, listening, reading and writing.
>> Correct.
This may seem obvious but it is sure that most people ignored.
>> This may seem obvious but it is sure that most people ignored it.
So, during the YL TESOL course, I completely realized that English is a tool for communication and interaction with people and I can motivate young learners that learning a language is for a chance to open a new door to meet people from different countries.
>> So, during the YL TESOL course, I completely realized that English is a tool for communication and interaction with people and I can motivate young learners that learning a language opens a new door to meet people from different countries.
How using now?
>> How to use it now?
Careful observation of children is important for me to provide appropriate materials and make good lesson plan for them.
>> Careful observation of children is important for me to provide appropriate materials and make a good lesson plan for them.
So, I asked some questions about what they like and what they want to know about English on the first day of my class at the community center.
>> Correct.
This was because finding children’s interest could be the starting step when they learn things SO, I closely observe each student’s multiple intelligences and try to provide materials which are based on their MI.
>>This was because finding children’s interest could be the starting step when they learn things. So, I closely observe each student’s multiple intelligences and try to provide materials which are based on their MI.
What do you want to do future?
>> What do you want to do in the future?
While doing the YL course, I’ve come to realize that I have a greater interest in developing English learning and teaching materials rather than the teaching itself.
>> Correct.
I would like to be a material developer for young learners after completing MA program.
>> I would like to be a material developer for young learners after completing the MA program.
How our program help do that?
>> How our program will help you do that?
I’m very interested in creating lesson or developing materials for all 4 skills and I think Computer Assisted Language Learning can be a good approach about it.
>> I\'m very interested in creating a lesson or developing materials for all 4 skills and I think Computer Assisted Language Learning can be a good approach to achieve it.
Actually, it was the first time that I use google classroom and I was stunned because it was totally learner centered and I could have chances for review and I also could learn things at my own pace.
>> Actually, it was the first time that I use google classroom and I was stunned because it was totally learner centered and I could have chances for review and learn things at my own pace.
So, through MA program, I want to know more about internet based language teaching such as flipped classroom.
>> Correct.
And Child Psychology class can help me have a better understanding of children and develop appropriate materials for them with more specific ways.
>> Correct.
Questions for us
>> Correct.
If I have a chance to go into MA program, I’ll have two months before the semester begins.
>> Correct.
During two months, is there anything that I could prepare before the class
>> In two months, is there anything that I could prepare for the class?
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