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2015-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What learned in this program? For my generation, learning a language is a tool for success such as getting a good job, entering a great university. So, I’m familiar with only receptive skills like listening and reading. On the other hand, YL program made me realize that in order to acquire a language in the soundest way, there are 4 skills that teachers and learners have to focus on, namely, speaking, listening, reading and writing. This may seem obvious but it is sure that most people ignored. So, during the YL TESOL course, I completely realized that English is a tool for communication and interaction with people and I can motivate young learners that learning a language is for a chance to open a new door to meet people from different countries. How using now? Careful observation of children is important for me to provide appropriate materials and make good lesson plan for them. So, I asked some questions about what they like and what they want to know about English on the first day of my class at the community center. This was because finding children’s interest could be the starting step when they learn things SO, I closely observe each student’s multiple intelligences and try to provide materials which are based on their MI. What do you want to do future? While doing the YL course, I’ve come to realize that I have a greater interest in developing English learning and teaching materials rather than the teaching itself. I would like to be a material developer for young learners after completing MA program. How our program help do that? I’m very interested in creating lesson or developing materials for all 4 skills and I think Computer Assisted Language Learning can be a good approach about it. Actually, it was the first time that I use google classroom and I was stunned because it was totally learner centered and I could have chances for review and I also could learn things at my own pace. So, through MA program, I want to know more about internet based language teaching such as flipped classroom. And Child Psychology class can help me have a better understanding of children and develop appropriate materials for them with more specific ways. Questions for us If I have a chance to go into MA program, I’ll have two months before the semester begins. During two months, is there anything that I could prepare before the class?

강사 첨삭

Good day Miss [이름]!

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~Kelly^^

What learned in this program?
>>
What I learned in this program
For my generation, learning a language is a tool for success such as getting a good job, entering a great university.

>> For my generation, learning a language is a tool for success such especially in getting a good job and entering a great university.

So, I’m familiar with only receptive skills like listening and reading.

>> Correct.

On the other hand, YL program made me realize that in order to acquire a language in the soundest way, there are 4 skills that teachers and learners have to focus on, namely, speaking, listening, reading and writing.

>> Correct.

This may seem obvious but it is sure that most people ignored.

>> This may seem obvious but it is sure that most people ignored it.

So, during the YL TESOL course, I completely realized that English is a tool for communication and interaction with people and I can motivate young learners that learning a language is for a chance to open a new door to meet people from different countries.
>>
So, during the YL TESOL course, I completely realized that English is a tool for communication and interaction with people and I can motivate young learners that learning a language opens a new door to meet people from different countries.
How  using now?

>> How to use it now?
Careful observation of children is important for me to provide appropriate materials and make good lesson plan for them.

>> Careful  observation of children is important for me to provide appropriate materials and make a good lesson plan for them.

So, I asked some questions about what they like and what they want to know about English on the first day of my class at the community center.

>> Correct.

This was because finding children’s interest could be the starting step when they learn things SO, I closely observe each student’s multiple intelligences and try to provide materials which are based on their MI.

>>This was because finding children’s interest could be the starting step when they learn things. So, I closely observe each student’s multiple intelligences and try to provide materials which are based on their MI.
What do you want to do future?

>> What  do you want to do in the future?

While doing the YL course, I’ve come to realize that I have a greater interest in developing English learning and teaching materials rather than the teaching itself.

>> Correct.

I would like to be a material developer for young learners after completing MA program.

>> I would like to be a material developer for young learners after completing the MA program.

How our program help do that?

>> How our program will help you do that?

I’m very interested in creating lesson or developing materials for all 4 skills and I think Computer Assisted Language Learning can be a good approach about it.

>> I\'m very interested in creating a lesson or developing materials for all 4 skills and I think Computer Assisted Language Learning can be a good approach to achieve it.

Actually, it was the first time that I use google classroom and I was stunned because it was totally learner centered and I could have chances for review and I also could learn things at my own pace.

>> Actually, it was the first time that I use google classroom and I was stunned because it was totally learner centered and I could have chances for review and learn things at my own pace.

So, through MA program, I want to know more about internet based language teaching such as flipped classroom.

>> Correct.

And Child Psychology class can help me have a better understanding of children and develop appropriate materials for them with more specific ways.

>> Correct.
Questions for us

>> Correct.
 If I have a chance to go into MA program, I’ll have two months before the semester begins.

>> Correct.

During two months, is there anything that I could prepare before the class

>> In two months, is there anything that I could prepare for the class?

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