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Good day, Teacher! Today, I learned a tip in relation to drinking coffee from you. Indeed, my last cold must have come from my bad habit. In your case, stop putting perfume and in my case, drinking water often! They are really small changes but will be very useful for us. ^^ Let's live healthier! See you! ^^ *Essay It has often been said, "a little knowledge is a dangerous thing." Do you agree? I do agree with this opinion. Nowadays, internet provides an enormous amount of knowledge for us but I don't think it is reliable. Sometimes, it gives incorrect information and hurts people. For example, let's say someone has skin trouble on his or her face and the person doesn't want to go to see a doctor and just is trying to find a solution to cure his or her symptom. The person found a tempting remedy over the internet and tried to follow that for a while. However, the result that the person is faced with is a terrible side effect. In the internet world, all people are pretending that they are a doctor and it is a dangerous dark side of using the internet. Because of its anonymity, it is easy for people to give advice and provide false information without verification. Someday, we can be a victim and perpetrator in the blink of an eye so we shouldn't blindly follow and believe in a little knowledge.

Good morning, [이름]!^^ It is good to know that I taught you something not only about English but something about your health, as well. To tell you frankly, I don\'t live healthily nowadays. Maybe, some other time, I\'ll inform you about it. kkkk Have a wonderful Tuesday!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good day, Teacher! >> CorrectToday, I learned a tip in relation to drinking coffee from you. >> CorrectIndeed, my last cold must have come from my bad habit. >> CorrectIn your case, stop putting perfume and in my case, drinking water often! >> In your case, stop putting perfume and in my case, drink water often!(Verb agreement)They are really small changes but will be very useful for us. ^^ >> CorrectLet\'s live healthier! >> Let\'s live more healthily!See you! ^^>> Correct*Essay It has often been said, \"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.\" Do you agree? I do agree with this opinion. >> CorrectNowadays, internet provides an enormous amount of knowledge for us but I don\'t think it is reliable. >> CorrectSometimes, it gives incorrect information and hurts people. >> CorrectFor example, let\'s say someone has skin trouble on his or her face and the person doesn\'t want to go to see a doctor and just is trying to find a solution to cure his or her symptom. >> For example, let\'s say someone has skin trouble on his or her face but the person doesn\'t want to go to see a doctor and just is trying to find a solution to cure his or her symptom. (Conjunction usage)The person found a tempting remedy over the internet and tried to follow that for a while. >> CorrectHowever, the result that the person is faced with is a terrible side effect. >> However, the result that the person faces is a terrible side effect. (Active voice)In the internet world, all people are pretending that they are a doctor and it is a dangerous dark side of using the internet. >> CorrectBecause of its anonymity, it is easy for people to give advice and provide false information without verification. >> CorrectSomeday, we can be a victim and perpetrator in the blink of an eye so we shouldn\'t blindly follow and believe in a little knowledge. >> Correct