Composition

Good morning, Teacher! Time flies very fast! Come to think of it, I haven't followed my initial plans that I made when this year started. I planned to read many books, experience a lot of new things and go on a trip. However, I am not contented with the result and apparently, I would have to put these plans in action in this coming year. There is a saying that promises are meant to be broken but, somehow, it is like an excuse for me. ^^;; In order not to get lazy, I am going to fresh my mind before this year passes. Finally, I hope both of us can have a plan only for ourselves, not for others. ^^ Take care and see you! *Essay Recent studies have shown that students often perform better on exams if classical music is played softly in the background. However, some students may find the music distracting. Should schools play classical music during exams and/or allow students to listen to it on headphones? In my opinion, the answer about the question is very simple. It depends on individual taste and if someone really wants to listen to classical music during taking an exam he or she just can use earphones. Just like what the subject already told above, some students may be disturbed by the music. We should not completely apply general studies to all students just because of its high percentage of advantage. What the studies have shown are not always right and reliable for all students to follow blindly.

[이름], impressive!^^ As days pass by, your writing skills are getting better and better. Keep up the good work!^^ With our plans to be discussed, [이름] my dear, I don\'t usually plan. I\'ll tell you soon about it. Take care! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectTime flies very fast! >> CorrectCome to think of it, I haven\'t followed my initial plans that I made when this year started. >> CorrectI planned to read many books, experience a lot of new things and go on a trip. >> CorrectHowever, I am not contented with the result and apparently, I would have to put these plans in action in this coming year. >> CorrectThere is a saying that promises are meant to be broken but, somehow, it is like an excuse for me. ^^;; >> CorrectIn order not to get lazy, I am going to fresh my mind before this year passes. >> CorrectFinally, I hope both of us can have a plan only for ourselves, not for others. ^^ >> CorrectTake care and see you! >> Correct*EssayRecent studies have shown that students often perform better on exams if classical music is played softly in the background. >> Correct However, some students may find the music distracting. >> However, some students may find the type of music distracting. (We don\'t use \"the\" with music.) Should schools play classical music during exams and/or allow students to listen to it on headphones? >> CorrectIn my opinion, the answer about the question is very simple. >> CorrectIt depends on individual taste and if someone really wants to listen to classical music during taking an exam he or she just can use earphones. >> CorrectJust like what the subject already told above, some students may be disturbed by the music. >> Just like what the subject already told above, some students may be disturbed by music. We should not completely apply general studies to all students just because of its high percentage of advantage. >> CorrectWhat the studies have shown are not always right and reliable for all students to follow blindly. >> Correct