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Dear my Teacher, Good day! First of all, I am glad to see you not to cough any longer. You can have sweets again. Congratulations! ^^ By the way, yesterday, I rode a bicycle to go to the library. I am a beginner when it comes to the bicycle so I was nervous about whenever I am riding it. It was 4 kilometers far from my place and my bicycle is old one so it didn't speed me into the destination. Fortunately, the bike road is flat and along the river so it was safe and not boring. If I go to the library again, I will use this way to improve my riding skill. That is all for today and I am going to be occupied with my tasks. ^^ See you tomorrow and have a nice day!

Hello and good morning, [이름]!^^ Thank you for sharing your experience to me last weekend. I am here to encourage you to continue riding a bicycle for you to learn continuously. It is just the same in studying English. You have to keep going!^^ Take care all the time. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear my Teacher, >> CorrectGood day! >> CorrectFirst of all, I am glad to see you not to cough any longer. >> First of all, I am glad to see you not coughing any longer. (Sentence pattern)You can have sweets again. >> CorrectCongratulations! ^^ >> CorrectBy the way, yesterday, I rode a bicycle to go to the library. >> CorrectI am a beginner when it comes to the bicycle so I was nervous about whenever I am riding it. >> I am a beginner when it comes to riding a bicycle so I was nervous whenever I am riding it. (No more preposition after nervous in this kind of sentence pattern.)It was 4 kilometers far from my place and my bicycle is old one so it didn\'t speed me into the destination. >> It was 4 kilometers far from my place and my bicycle is an old one so it quick enough for me going to my destination. (We don\'t normally use \"didnt\'t speed me)Fortunately, the bike road is flat and along the river so it was safe and not boring. >> CorrectIf I go to the library again, I will use this way to improve my riding skill. >> CorrectThat is all for today and I am going to be occupied with my tasks. ^^ >>  CorrectSee you tomorrow and have a nice day! >> Correct