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Good morning again, Teacher! I am a little upset because of my poor memory. How could I not remember 'How tall are you?'? Sometimes, I haven't been able to use vocabulary that I already know when I am talking to you because it suddenly doesn't cross my mind. I think it is a matter of practice. Aside from you, I have no chance to talk in English. As for me, studding English is an endless challenge. I still have a long way to go. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! *Essay Should a parent be a child's disciplinarian, or a child's best friend? In my opinion, parents should be a child's best friend. The relationship between parents and child is the most basic and important thing. If parents only emphasize rules and force their child to do like this like that, their child will feel suffocated. Moreover, I think it will be more efficient for parents to teach their child as being a best friend. They can understand their child more when putting themselves in child's position. If they are willing to show their real mind that they want to be a good friend to their child, I am sure that it can lead to a good educational effect.

Happy Tuesday, [이름]!^^ When it comes to your memory, don\'t feel so upset about it. We are not perfect so forgetting some things is normal. I even have worse situations than you do. Don\'t punish yourself that badly. OK? I\'ll see you again tomorrow!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning again, Teacher! >> CorrectI am a little upset because of my poor memory. >> CorrectHow could I not remember \'How tall are you?\'? >> CorrectSometimes, I haven\'t been able to use vocabulary that I already know when I am talking to you because it suddenly doesn\'t cross my mind. >> CorrectI think it is a matter of practice. >> CorrectAside from you, I have no chance to talk in English. >> Aside from talking with you, I have no other chances to talk in English. (Parallelism of ideas)As for me, studding English is an endless challenge. >> As for me studying English is an endless challenge. (Spelling)I still have a long way to go. ^^;; >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> Correct*Essay Should a parent be a child\'s disciplinarian, or a child\'s best friend?In my opinion, parents should be a child\'s best friend. >> CorrectThe relationship between parents and child is the most basic and important thing. >> The relationship between parents and a child is the most basic and important thing. (Article)If parents only emphasize rules and force their child to do like this like that, their child will feel suffocated. >> CorrectMoreover, I think it will be more efficient for parents to teach their child as being a best friend. >> CorrectThey can understand their child more when putting themselves in child\'s position. >>They can understand their child more when putting themselves in the child\'s position. (article usage)If they are willing to show their real mind that they want to be a good friend to their child, I am sure that it can lead to a good educational effect. >> Correct