Composition

My beautiful Teacher, good evening! Tomorrow, I have to go to another city to meet one of my customers so I'd like to submit my composition to you earlier. I am going to leave for there about 10 AM so I won't have plenty of time to do my homework. Now, I have finished my tasks and checked a correction that you helped me make. You even encouraged me to keep on studying English and I am touched by your words. By your encouragement, I tried to make a call to a person in Hong Kong and successfully had a conversation with each other. However, I still felt that I am comfortable when I am taking with you. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

Hi, [이름]!^^ Thank you for informing me about your schedule. Luckily, you will have to leave at around 10 am. I will still have a chance to meet you this morning. Keep on studying English and soar high!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ My beautiful Teacher, good evening! >> CorrectTomorrow, I have to go to another city to meet one of my customers so I\'d like to submit my composition to you earlier. >> CorrectI am going to leave for there about 10 AM so I won\'t have plenty of time to do my homework. >> I am going to leave for (name of the place) about 10 AM so I won\'t have plenty of time to do my homework.Now, I have finished my tasks and checked a correction that you helped me make. >> Now, I have finished my tasks and checked the corrections you helped me with. (Plural form of the noun and vocabulary usage.)You even encouraged me to keep on studying English and I am touched by your words. >> CorrectBy your encouragement, I tried to make a call to a person in Hong Kong and successfully had a conversation with each other. >> CorrectHowever, I still felt that I am comfortable when I am taking with you. ^^;; >> However, I still felt that I feel comfortable when I am talking with you. (very usage and spelling.)That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^ >> Correct