Composition

Good morning, Teacher! My schedule to visit one of my customers was canceled so I am in my office now. After finishing our class, he gave me a call and said that he has an urgent task to deal with today. Well, I can't do anything in this kind of situation. ^^;; That is okay! I am gladder to be in my office and do my tasks. Moreover, I can submit my composition against the subject that you gave me. Please help me check if I did it well. ^^ See you tomorrow! *Essay More and more Americans are deciding to eliminate meat from their diets and become vegetarians. Do you think this is a good idea? In my opinion, it is not a good way for them to eliminate meat from their diets and become vegetarians. There are two kinds of protein and one is from vegetables and the other one is from meat. They contain a different kind of ingredient of protein so we should intake them together. Beans are considered as a typical vegetable protein and many vegetarians only intake protein from them. However, if they only continue eating beans and not eating meat, it will lead to a lack of essential amino acids. That is why it is helpful for us to have meat suitably.

Hello, [이름]!^^ I am not sure if this one is appropriate but it was good to know that you only stayed in your office. I believed you were able to finish a lot of tasks.^^ Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. Since I am not an American, I need to have this diet for me to lose weight. kkk ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectMy schedule to visit one of my customers was canceled so I am in my office now. >> CorrectAfter finishing our class, he gave me a call and said that he has an urgent task to deal with today. >> CorrectWell, I can\'t do anything in this kind of situation. ^^;; >> CorrectThat is okay! >> CorrectI am gladder to be in my office and do my tasks. >> CorretMoreover, I can submit my composition against the subject that you gave me. >> Moreover, I can submit my composition about the subject that you gave me. (Against?? Am I fighting with you??? kkk..)Please help me check if I did it well. ^^ >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> Correct*EssayMore and more Americans are deciding to eliminate meat from their diets and become vegetarians. Do you think this is a good idea?In my opinion, it is not a good way for them to eliminate meat from their diets and become vegetarians. >> CorrectThere are two kinds of protein and one is from vegetables and the other one is from meat. >> There are two kinds of protein: One kind can be found in vegetables while the other one is from meat. (Punctuation and sentence pattern)They contain a different kind of ingredient of protein so we should intake them together. >> CorrectBeans are considered as a typical vegetable protein and many vegetarians only intake protein from them. >> Beans are considered as a typical source of vegetable protein and many vegetarians only intake protein from them. (Vocabulary use)However, if they only continue eating beans and not eating meat, it will lead to a lack of essential amino acids. >> However, if they only continue eating beans and they dont eat meat, it will lead to a lack of essential amino acids. That is why it is helpful for us to have meat suitably. >> Correct