Composition

Good morning, Teacher! It is very cold today and the temperature is negative 7 degrees Celsius here. I am wearing many layers of thin clothes so it makes my movement uncomfortable. Suddenly, the weather has changed to be cold and I am afraid of how I should go through this cold winter. The heating cost will be a burden to me and maybe, all people's thinking will be the same. I wish the window of my house would face south. If I move to another house after 2 years, first, I will give importance to a location of the window. Well, I would have to go home late to save my heating cost. ^^;; I am going to be occupied with my tasks right now and see you tomorrow! Take care!

Hello, [이름]! I hate to hear that your temperature went down again and that it gives you sufferings regarding your movement and budget. I know the following days will be colder so whatever happens, keep your body healthy to avoid getting sick. Take care!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> Correct It is very cold today and the temperature is negative 7 degrees Celsius here. >> CorrectI am wearing many layers of thin clothes so it makes my movement uncomfortable. >> I am wearing many layers of thin clothes so it makes me feel comfortable when I move.  (sentence pattern)Suddenly, the weather has changed to be cold and I am afraid of how I should go through this cold winter. >> Suddenly, the weather has changed into cold and I am afraid of how I should go through this cold winter. (Preposition usage and collocation)The heating cost will be a burden to me and maybe, all people\'s thinking will be the same. >> The heating cost will be a burden to me and maybe, all people are thinking about the same thing. (We don\'t usually say somebody\'s thinking)I wish the window of my house would face south. >> CorrectIf I move to another house after 2 years, first, I will give importance to a location of the window. >> CorrectWell, I would have to go home late to save my heating cost. ^^;; >> CorrectI am going to be occupied with my tasks right now and see you tomorrow! >> CorrectTake care! >>Correct