Composition

Dear Teacher, Thank you to revise the subject of homework for me. I guess I will be very busy next week so I am going to do my duty in advance. Take care! ^^ *Politicians come from all sorts of professional backgrounds, from lawyers and chief executive officers to actors and even professional wrestlers. On a few notable occasions, politicians with criminal backgrounds have even been elected. In your opinion, should candidates with a criminal record be allowed to run for office? In my opinion, people have a right to know all things about candidates even if they are not willing to disclose their privacy. We can say that politicians are representative of the public so they should be upright and innocent. If we don't monitor them and only see their career and abilities, we might ignore their real characters. Voting politicians well is not only our duty, but also our right. We should take a responsibility in electing them. That is why we need more information about them even including criminal backgrounds.

Hello there, [이름]! First of all, I apologize for the inconvenience I brought last Friday due to the homework. And secondly, thank you for answering it promptly. Today is another day for us so let\'s make it count!^^ See you later!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> CorrectThank you to revise the subject of homework for me. >> Thank you for revising the subject of homework for me. (Thank you for doing something)I guess I will be very busy next week so I am going to do my duty in advance. >> Correct Take care! ^^*Politicians come from all sorts of professional backgrounds, from lawyers and chief executive officers to actors and even professional wrestlers. On a few notable occasions, politicians with criminal backgrounds have even been elected. In your opinion, should candidates with a criminal record be allowed to run for office? In my opinion, people have a right to know all things about candidates even if they are not willing to disclose their privacy. >> In my opinion, people have the right to know all things about the candidates even if they are not willing to disclose their privacy. (Article usage)We can say that politicians are representative of the public so they should be upright and innocent. >> We can say that politicians are the representatives of the public so they should be upright and innocent. (article usage)If we don\'t monitor them and only see their career and abilities, we might ignore their real characters. >> Correct Voting politicians well is not only our duty, but also our right. >> Correct We should take a responsibility in electing them. >> We should take responsibilites in electing them. (Plural form for general ideas)That is why we need more information about them even including criminal backgrounds. >> Correct