Composition

Teacher, good morning! Because of my busy tasks, I am going to write my composition shortly. I want to correct what I said during our class about a Christmas tree. What I wanted to say was that about 10~20% of people like having their own Christmas tree. I really need to improve my pronunciation to convey my meaning well. ^^;; Have a nice day and enjoy your Charismas season! ^^ See you tomorrow! ~

Hello, [이름]!^^ I love to see your long compositions but I know that you are very busy. Still I want to thank you for your unending diligence in doing your homework. There are some corrections that I made so please double check them. See you tomorrow!^^ Don\'t exhaust yourself much. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Teacher, good morning! >> CorrectBecause of my busy tasks, I am going to write my composition shortly. >> Correct or>> Because of my busy tasks, I am going to make my composition short.I want to correct what I said during our class about a Christmas tree. >> CorrectWhat I wanted to say was that about 10~20% of people like having their own Christmas tree. >> CorrectI really need to improve my pronunciation to convey my meaning well. ^^;; >> CorrectHave a nice day and enjoy your Charismas season! ^^ >> Have a nice day and enjoy your Christmas season! (Spelling)See you tomorrow! ~ >> Correct