Composition

Hi, Teacher! Good evening! I am in the office now and I am going to submit my composition before I go home. See you tomorrow! ^^ *Essay Students who don't want to do their homework can find dozens of sites on the Internet that offer essays for sale. Do you think this is a legitimate business, or should these enterprises be shut down? In my opinion, it is not a good way for students to do their homework to use this way. However, unfortunately, we can't control this kind of business by force under a capitalistic society. In their views, it is a legal behavior because they are selling their abilities for students. They probably think that they are not doing any bad and illegal deeds so they will consider it as a kind of good business item. In this situation, we only can't help to rely on individual conscience and we should lead students to an upright direction in order not to deceive themselves.

Hello [이름]!^^ Until what time did you stay in the office? Was it an overtime? Are you rushing some things before the holiday season? I hope you could answer all my questions!^^ kkk See yah!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi, Teacher! >> CorrectGood evening! >>CorrectI am in the office now and I am going to submit my composition before I go home. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! ^^ >> Correct*EssayStudents who don\'t want to do their homework can find dozens of sites on the Internet that offer essays for sale. Do you think this is a legitimate business, or should these enterprises be shut down?In my opinion, it is not a good way for students to do their homework to use this way. >> In my opinion, it is not a good way for students to do their homework using this way. (Sentence Pattern: participial phrase)However, unfortunately, we can\'t control this kind of business by force under a capitalistic society. >> CorrectIn their views, it is a legal behavior because they are selling their abilities for students. >> CorrectThey probably think that they are not doing any bad and illegal deeds so they will consider it as a kind of good business item. >> CorrectIn this situation, we only can\'t help to rely on individual conscience and we should lead students to an upright direction in order not to deceive themselves. >> In this situation, we can\'t only help but to rely on individual conscience and we should lead students to an upright direction in order not to deceive themselves. (Sentence pattern: Can\'t do something but to)