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2015-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! I am happy for hearing a good news that you can rest on the last day of this month. I already know about your plan and I think it is the best schedule for you to have a wonderful holiday. Even though I am very busy these days but I am still happy to wait for this holiday. Anyway, have a great day and take care! See you! ^^ *Essay Do you think the SAT or ACT exam is an accurate measure of a student's aptitude for college? I am not aware of the SAT and ACT well so it is hard for me to answer. However, we also have this kind of university entrance exam. Maybe, it will be similar with them. When it comes to the university entrance exam, I don't think it is an accurate measure of a student's aptitude for college. Especially here in Korea, colleges only see the record that students got. Can we judge someone by the result of an exam and do we have a right to do like this? All people have their own talent and it is unable to be verified only by one exam. That is why we don't need to regret for not getting into a good university. P.S.: Teacher, you will win the lottery someday. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^ I am totally excited about the coming holidays!^^ This maybe a good one for me. I mean a bit different!^^ I hope we have a lot of time to talk about it, too. Thank you so much for being a good student my dear. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectI am happy for hearing a good news that you can rest on the last day of this month. >> I am happy for hearing the good news that you can rest on the last day of this month. (article usage)I already know about your plan and I think it is the best schedule for you to have a wonderful holiday. >> Correct Even though I am very busy these days but I am still happy to wait for this holiday. >> Even though I am very busy these days, I am still happy to wait for this holiday. (Remove \"but\")Anyway, have a great day and take care! >> CorrectSee you! ^^ >> Correct*Essay Do you think the SAT or ACT exam is an accurate measure of a student\'s aptitude for college?I am not aware of the SAT and ACT well so it is hard for me to answer. >> Correct However, we also have this kind of university entrance exam. >> Correct Maybe, it will be similar with them. >> Correct When it comes to the university entrance exam, I don\'t think it is an accurate measure of a student\'s aptitude for college. >> Correct Especially here in Korea, colleges only see the record that students got. >> Correct Can we judge someone by the result of an exam and do we have a right to do like this? >> Correct All people have their own talent and it is unable to be verified only by one exam. >> Correct That is why we don\'t need to regret for not getting into a good university. >> Correct

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