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2011-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Nam[이름] already booked in Apr. and encluded closing Apr. But I can't put in SAP because there are some PO problem. I received some informations about solution of PO problem from Juyoung Kim. Can I book in SAP for May?? But I can't post for May. The reason is as seen below. Thank you.

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Good morning. Thank you for your composition my dear.. :) I hope, you can find the best solution to your problem. Take care and have a nice day.  :) Dear [Name]. [Name],>> Correct.Nam[이름] already booked in Apr. and encluded closing Apr.>> Nam[이름] was booked in April. The booking schedule ended last month. But I can't put in SAP because there are some PO problem.>> But I can뭪 put in SAP because there are PO problems.I received some informations about solution of PO problem from Juyoung Kim.>> I received some information about the solution of PO problem from Juyoung Kim.Can I book in SAP for May?? >>Correct. But I can't post for May.>> But I can뭪 post it on May.The reason is as seen below. >>correct>> The reason is stated below.Thank you.

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