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2016-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! These days, the fine dust from China has been a big problem here in Korea. In this kind of terrible dust, a mask is an essential good. Fortunately, I can see a blue sky after a long time today. As I heard, the fine dust will lead to a serious respiratory disease so it is the best way for us not to go out when it is coming. I guess you don't experience this kind of air condition there, do you? Anyway, even if I am very tired of handling my tasks I can't avoid facing them. Wish me luck! ^^ Have a nice day and see you tomorrow! *^^*

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!^^ I have heard about that situation already even before and now I\'m worried about you and other people. It was said that the yellow dust indeed lead to some respiratory diseases when you accidentally inhale them. I hope your mask is thick enough to protect you from this complications. Take care and good luck in finishing your tasks. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectThese days, the fine dust from China has been a big problem here in Korea. >> CorrectIn this kind of terrible dust, a mask is an essential good. >> In this kind of situation with this terrible dust, a mask is an essential good. Fortunately, I can see a blue sky after a long time today. >> Correct As I heard, the fine dust will lead to a serious respiratory disease so it is the best way for us not to go out when it is coming. >> CorrectI guess you don\'t experience this kind of air condition there, do you? >> CorrectAnyway, even if I am very tired of handling my tasks I can\'t avoid facing them. >> Correct Wish me luck! ^^ >> CorrectHave a nice day and see you tomorrow! *^^* >> Correct

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