Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
I just opened my Outlook on my computer and I am amazed at a lot of mails again.
Because of Korea and China Free Trade Agreement, I need to check and confirm a lot of things.
Moreover, Chinese New Year is coming soon and they can't ship their goods to customers on those days.
Therefore, I need to adjust shipping schedule to deliver the goods before holiday starts.
Out of the frying pan and into the fire! ^^;;
I am sorry that I can't submit my homework that you gave due to my busyness for a while.
I will do it when I am back to normal in a few days. ^^
Take care and see you tomorrow! *^^*
강사 첨삭
[이름] my dear,
I know that you are busy nowadays especially
Chinese New Year is coming. You have to settle first
all the things you have to do and think about the homework
some other time. You can just skip the topics that I gave you
and focus next time on the homework when you are available.
Take care and don\'t exhaust yourself much.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectI just opened my Outlook on my computer and I am amazed at a lot of mails again.
>> CorrectBecause of Korea and China Free Trade Agreement, I need to check and confirm a lot of things.
>> Because of the Korea and China Free Trade Agreement, I need to check and confirm a lot of things.Moreover, Chinese New Year is coming soon and they can\'t ship their goods to customers on those days.
>> CorrectTherefore, I need to adjust shipping schedule to deliver the goods before holiday starts.
>> Therefore, I need to adjust the shipping schedule to deliver the goods before the holiday starts.Out of the frying pan and into the fire! ^^;;
>> CorrectI am sorry that I can\'t submit my homework that you gave due to my busyness for a while.
>> CorrectI will do it when I am back to normal in a few days. ^^
>> I will do it when I come to normal in a few days.Take care and see you tomorrow! *^^* >> Correct
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