Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
I am in the office now and it is 7:20 PM.
Before I go home, I'd like to submit my homework.
I hope you have a long sleep tonight! ^^
See you later!
*Essay
Charles Simmons said, "Live only for today, and you ruin tomorrow." Do you agree? Why or why not? Explain your answer.
I really want to follow the saying but I seem to be unable to do that in reality.
There are many conditions to live only for today.
First, we need enough time to enjoy our lives.
However, as we know, we are stuck at workplace or school all day and even someone can't have time to rest.
Second, we don't have plenty of money to spend to the fullest.
Who will pay for us for free?
What will happen in the future if we don't try to make money?
It is easy to estimate what will happen.
If welfare system here is perfect and we don't need to be worried about our future lives, I probably can live only for today and ruin tomorrow.
I hope I will have been living like that someday. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello, my dear [이름].
You have had your overtime again and I really blame those
hundreds of emails that you attend to.
I hope that when we talk later, you won\'t feel sleepy and
I can wake you up.
See you in a bit!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> CorrectI am in the office now and it is 7:20 PM.
>> CorrectBefore I go home, I\'d like to submit my homework.
>> CorrectI hope you have a long sleep tonight! ^^
>> CorrectSee you later! >> Correct
*Essay Charles Simmons said, \"Live only for today, and you ruin tomorrow.\" Do you agree? Why or why not? Explain your answer.I really want to follow the saying but I seem to be unable to do that in reality.
>> I really want to follow the saying but it seems like I am unable to do that in reality. There are many conditions to live only for today.
>> CorrectFirst, we need enough time to enjoy our lives.
>> CorrectHowever, as we know, we are stuck at workplace or school all day and even someone can\'t have time to rest.
>> However, as we know, we are stuck at a workplace or school all day and someone can\'t even have time to rest.
Second, we don\'t have plenty of money to spend to the fullest.
>> Second, we don\'t have plenty of money to spend time to the fullest.Who will pay for us for free?
>> CorrectWhat will happen in the future if we don\'t try to make money?
>> CorrectIt is easy to estimate what will happen.
>> CorrectIf welfare system here is perfect and we don\'t need to be worried about our future lives, I probably can live only for today and ruin tomorrow.
>> If the welfare system here is perfect and we don\'t need to be worried about our future lives, I probably can live only for today and ruin tomorrow.I hope I will have been living like that someday. ^^ >> Correct
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