Composition

2016-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher, Good afternoon! I used to submit my composition in the morning but nowadays, because of my uncountable tasks, I don't even have confidence to perform my homework every day. I am going to comfort myself with the thought that I can be patient only for today and tomorrow to greet this coming weekend. Even if weekend always passes quickly the feeling of greeting it is wonderful. ^^ Well, at the moment, I feel happy. ^^* See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear, [이름]. I can feel the happiness that you felt while writing this composition.^^ Apparently, I am also happy greeting Friday since it is an indicator that we are going to take a rest the following day. See you later!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> Correct.Good afternoon! >> CorrectI used to submit my composition in the morning but nowadays, because of my uncountable tasks, I don\'t even have confidence to perform my homework every day. >> CorrectI am going to comfort myself with the thought that I can be patient only for today and tomorrow to greet this coming weekend. >> CorrectEven if weekend always passes quickly the feeling of greeting it is wonderful. ^^ >> CorrectWell, at the moment, I feel happy. ^^* >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> Correct

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