Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
Good afternoon!
I used to submit my composition in the morning but nowadays, because of my uncountable tasks, I don't even have confidence to perform my homework every day.
I am going to comfort myself with the thought that I can be patient only for today and tomorrow to greet this coming weekend.
Even if weekend always passes quickly the feeling of greeting it is wonderful. ^^
Well, at the moment, I feel happy. ^^*
See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear, [이름].
I can feel the happiness that you felt while writing
this composition.^^
Apparently, I am also happy greeting Friday since it is
an indicator that we are going to take a rest the following day.
See you later!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> Correct.Good afternoon!
>> CorrectI used to submit my composition in the morning but nowadays, because of my uncountable tasks, I don\'t even have confidence to perform my homework every day.
>> CorrectI am going to comfort myself with the thought that I can be patient only for today and tomorrow to greet this coming weekend.
>> CorrectEven if weekend always passes quickly the feeling of greeting it is wonderful. ^^
>> CorrectWell, at the moment, I feel happy. ^^*
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow!
>> Correct
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