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Dear [Name]. [Name]
>> Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
>> Correct
I can't found invoices of Samgoma and Shanhai Ri Yong.
>> I can't find the invoices of Samgoma and Shanhai Ri Yong.
We try to find many time from last year.
>> We've been trying to look for them several times from last year.
However, we can't find invoices any more.
>> Correct
Please see the attached file.
>> Correct
You can find copy of invoices except two invoices.
>> You can find the copy of invoices except the two invoices.
Thank you.
>> Correct
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