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2011-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name] afternoon! I can't found invoices of Samgoma and Shanhai Ri Yong. We try to find many time from last year. However, we can't find invoices any more. Please see the attached file. You can find copy of invoices except two invoices. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Bella my dear!

Thank you for your composition today! Please be guided by the corrections provided below. Have a good day!

Dear [Name]. [Name]
>> Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
>> Correct
I can't found invoices of Samgoma and Shanhai Ri Yong.
>> I can't find the invoices of Samgoma and Shanhai Ri Yong.
We try to find many time from last year.
>> We've been trying to look for them several times from last year.
However, we can't find invoices any more.
>> Correct
Please see the attached file.
>> Correct
You can find copy of invoices except two invoices.
>> You can find the copy of invoices except the two invoices.
Thank you.

>> Correct

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