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2016-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher Good morning! First of all, I am thankful for your advice about my symptom. I feel reassured that you are there. Now, I am drinking a bottle of Yakult and Gatorade. Moreover, for my pitiful stomach, I bought a bowl of porridge. My eyelids are very heavy but I still need to deal with my tasks. I hope time will go fast today. ^^;; Have a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^ Take care! *^^*

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^ You are very welcome!^^ I just hope that you will get a better because of the gatorade and yakult that I recommended. And praise to you for initiating the buying of porridge!^^ It will be very helpful for you!^^ Please don\'t pressure yourself much, OK? ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher >> CorrectGood morning! >> CorrectFirst of all, I am thankful for your advice about my symptom. >> CorrectI feel reassured that you are there. >> CorrectNow, I am drinking a bottle of Yakult and Gatorade. >> CorrectMoreover, for my pitiful stomach, I bought a bowl of porridge. >> CorrectMy eyelids are very heavy but I still need to deal with my tasks. >> CorrectI hope time will go fast today. ^^;; >> CorrectHave a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^ >> CorrectTake care! *^^* >> Correct

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