Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher
Good morning!
First of all, I am thankful for your advice about my symptom.
I feel reassured that you are there.
Now, I am drinking a bottle of Yakult and Gatorade.
Moreover, for my pitiful stomach, I bought a bowl of porridge.
My eyelids are very heavy but I still need to deal with my tasks.
I hope time will go fast today. ^^;;
Have a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^
Take care! *^^*
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
You are very welcome!^^
I just hope that you will get a better because of the gatorade and yakult that
I recommended. And praise to you for initiating the buying of porridge!^^
It will be very helpful for you!^^
Please don\'t pressure yourself much, OK?
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher
>> CorrectGood morning!
>> CorrectFirst of all, I am thankful for your advice about my symptom.
>> CorrectI feel reassured that you are there.
>> CorrectNow, I am drinking a bottle of Yakult and Gatorade.
>> CorrectMoreover, for my pitiful stomach, I bought a bowl of porridge.
>> CorrectMy eyelids are very heavy but I still need to deal with my tasks.
>> CorrectI hope time will go fast today. ^^;;
>> CorrectHave a wonderful weekend and see you next Monday! ^^
>> CorrectTake care! *^^*
>> Correct
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