Composition

2016-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher, Good afternoon! I just got in my office after having late lunch and I am making a composition in my short spare time. I feel a little drowsy after eating. I really want to take a nap for a while but there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with within today. There is no end to my busyness. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! P.S.: Thanks for listening to my personal story attentively.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! It is indeed a very sad thing to know that you have been very busy. If I could only put an end to your tasks, I would really do it for  you. Just don\'t forget to take care of your body. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> CorrectGood afternoon! >> CorrectI just got in my office after having late lunch and I am making a composition in my short spare time. >> Correct (thank you for spending your short time in writing!)I feel a little drowsy after eating. >> Correct I really want to take a nap for a while but there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with within today. >> I really want to take a nap for a while but there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with today. /within the day. (We don\'t normally have a preposition before the word \"today\")There is no end to my busyness. ^^;; >> Correct (Please don\'t say this....)That is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> CorrectP.S.: Thanks for listening to my personal story attentively. >> Correct (I will always be here listening.)

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