Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
Good afternoon!
I just got in my office after having late lunch and I am making a composition in my short spare time.
I feel a little drowsy after eating.
I really want to take a nap for a while but there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with within today.
There is no end to my busyness. ^^;;
That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
P.S.: Thanks for listening to my personal story attentively.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It is indeed a very sad thing to know that you
have been very busy. If I could only put an end
to your tasks, I would really do it for you.
Just don\'t forget to take care of your body.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> CorrectGood afternoon!
>> CorrectI just got in my office after having late lunch and I am making a composition in my short spare time.
>> Correct (thank you for spending your short time in writing!)I feel a little drowsy after eating.
>> Correct I really want to take a nap for a while but there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with within today.
>> I really want to take a nap for a while but there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with today. /within the day. (We don\'t normally have a preposition before the word \"today\")There is no end to my busyness. ^^;;
>> Correct (Please don\'t say this....)That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
>> CorrectP.S.: Thanks for listening to my personal story attentively.
>> Correct (I will always be here listening.)
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.