Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
Today, our boss will go on a business trip so I feel free.
He will be back after 3 days.
It means that I can escape from his scolding for the renaming days of this week.
Now, I am turning the radio on and listening to music with my coworkers.
I somehow feel at home in the office. ^^;;
My boyfriend is also in Phuket and it is also a kind of business trip for him.
He got there yesterday and will get back here this Saturday.
I asked him to buy Durian chips and honey when he comes back.
I am looking forward to him coming back.
Don't get me wrong! It is not because of the Durian chips. ^^;;
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
강사 첨삭
[이름], my dear,
I know that you are waiting for your boyfriend because of the Durian chips.
You can\'t hide from me!^^
I am also happy to know that you are now free from quite some time.
Enjoy every moment for it will only last for few days.
But don\'t forget your tasks, ok?
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectToday, our boss will go on a business trip so I feel free.
>> CorrectHe will be back after 3 days.
>> CorrectIt means that I can escape from his scolding for the renaming days of this week.
>> Correct Now, I am turning the radio on and listening to music with my coworkers.
>> CorrectI somehow feel at home in the office. ^^;;
>> CorrectMy boyfriend is also in Phuket and it is also a kind of business trip for him. >> Correct
He got there yesterday and will get back here this Saturday.
>> CorrectI asked him to buy Durian chips and honey when he comes back.
>> CorrectI am looking forward to him coming back.
>> I am looking forward to seeing him again. / meeting him again.Don\'t get me wrong! It is not because of the Durian chips. ^^;;
>> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct
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