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2016-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! Today, our boss will go on a business trip so I feel free. He will be back after 3 days. It means that I can escape from his scolding for the renaming days of this week. Now, I am turning the radio on and listening to music with my coworkers. I somehow feel at home in the office. ^^;; My boyfriend is also in Phuket and it is also a kind of business trip for him. He got there yesterday and will get back here this Saturday. I asked him to buy Durian chips and honey when he comes back. I am looking forward to him coming back. Don't get me wrong! It is not because of the Durian chips. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

  [이름], my dear, I know that you are waiting for your boyfriend because of the Durian chips. You can\'t hide from me!^^ I am also happy to know that you are now free from quite some time. Enjoy every moment for it will only last for few days. But don\'t forget your tasks, ok? ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectToday, our boss will go on a business trip so I feel free. >> CorrectHe will be back after 3 days. >> CorrectIt means that I can escape from his scolding for the renaming days of this week. >> Correct Now, I am turning the radio on and listening to music with my coworkers. >> CorrectI somehow feel at home in the office. ^^;; >> CorrectMy boyfriend is also in Phuket and it is also a kind of business trip for him. >> Correct He got there yesterday and will get back here this Saturday. >> CorrectI asked him to buy Durian chips and honey when he comes back. >> CorrectI am looking forward to him coming back. >> I am looking forward to seeing him again. / meeting him again.Don\'t get me wrong! It is not because of the Durian chips. ^^;; >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct

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