Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
Good morning!
This morning, I took our class at home and there was something wrong on my recording system so I couldn't record our conversation.
Listening to the recording is one of my rules in studying English.
However, somehow, I can feel free because I escaped from my burden at least this day. Hahaha! ^^
You might be wondering why I took our class at home.
Today, I went to a public clinic near my home to get a annual checkup before going to work.
I took a urine and blood test then I had a chest X-ray.
The result will come out after one week.
Now, I just hope the result will be good and I don't need to get any additional tests.
I think you also need to get a medical checkup because you are already concerned about your body condition.
It is very simple.
Even if you don't have free time I still want you to have it in a short time.
I suddenly nagged. ^^;;
See you tomorrow! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!^^It\'s almost lunch time!^^
But I still want to greet you a good morning. kkk
Thanks for the concern but I will try my best to stay healthy.
You too!^^
See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> Correct.Good morning!
>> Correct.This morning, I took our class at home and there was something wrong on my recording system so I couldn\'t record our conversation.
>> Correct.Listening to the recording is one of my rules in studying English.
>> Correct.However, somehow, I can feel free because I escaped from my burden at least this day. Hahaha! ^^
>> Correct.You might be wondering why I took our class at home.
>> Correct. Today, I went to a public clinic near my home to get a annual checkup before going to work.
>> Today, I went to a public clinic near my home to get an annual checkup before going to work. I took a urine and blood test then I had a chest X-ray. The result will come out after one week.
>> Correct.Now, I just hope the result will be good and I don\'t need to get any additional tests.
>> Correct.I think you also need to get a medical checkup because you are already concerned about your body condition.
>> Correct.It is very simple.
>> Correct.Even if you don\'t have free time I still want you to have it in a short time.
>> Correct.I suddenly nagged. ^^;;
>> Correct.See you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct.
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