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2016-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher, Good morning! This morning, I took our class at home and there was something wrong on my recording system so I couldn't record our conversation. Listening to the recording is one of my rules in studying English. However, somehow, I can feel free because I escaped from my burden at least this day. Hahaha! ^^ You might be wondering why I took our class at home. Today, I went to a public clinic near my home to get a annual checkup before going to work. I took a urine and blood test then I had a chest X-ray. The result will come out after one week. Now, I just hope the result will be good and I don't need to get any additional tests. I think you also need to get a medical checkup because you are already concerned about your body condition. It is very simple. Even if you don't have free time I still want you to have it in a short time. I suddenly nagged. ^^;; See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!^^It\'s almost lunch time!^^ But I still want to greet you a good morning. kkk Thanks for the concern but I will try my best to stay healthy. You too!^^ See you tomorrow! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> Correct.Good morning! >> Correct.This morning, I took our class at home and there was something wrong on my recording system so I couldn\'t record our conversation. >> Correct.Listening to the recording is one of my rules in studying English. >> Correct.However, somehow, I can feel free because I escaped from my burden at least this day. Hahaha! ^^ >> Correct.You might be wondering why I took our class at home. >> Correct. Today, I went to a public clinic near my home to get a annual checkup before going to work. >> Today, I went to a public clinic near my home to get an annual checkup before going to work. I took a urine and blood test then I had a chest X-ray. The result will come out after one week. >> Correct.Now, I just hope the result will be good and I don\'t need to get any additional tests. >> Correct.I think you also need to get a medical checkup because you are already concerned about your body condition. >> Correct.It is very simple. >> Correct.Even if you don\'t have free time I still want you to have it in a short time. >> Correct.I suddenly nagged. ^^;; >> Correct.See you tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct.

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