Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
Good evening!
I have been occupied with my terrible tasks so I can't help to submit my composition just now.
I am not sure I can deal with this trouble in relation to my work within this day.
It is out of my control so I am trying to shut it out of my mind.
I don't want to spoil my feelings of waiting for the weekend just because of this terrible situation.
I will think of it positively! ^^
By the way, I finally got your letter today.
As soon as I found it from the mailbox, I felt excited.
After writhing it, I was so touched.
I like the word of what you wrote on the letter.
"Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow!"
You always give me good lessons.
Regarding to your letter, there is one thing that I can't accept.
I have never thought that you have shortcomings as my teacher.
Not only do you teach me, but you give me energy every morning.
I hope you are always energetic and positive so that I can get influenced by you in a good way. ^^
Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!^^
I was thinking last Friday that you had been doing
your tasks again in the office so you were not
able to send your composition on time.
However, to send or not to send would be fine.
Your tasks at your workplace are more important for me.
I hope you can finish everything today.
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> CorrectGood evening!
>> CorrectI have been occupied with my terrible tasks so I can\'t help to submit my composition just now.
>> CorrectI am not sure I can deal with this trouble in relation to my work within this day.
>> I am not sure whether I can deal with this trouble in relation to my work within this day.It is out of my control so I am trying to shut it out of my mind.
>> CorrectI don\'t want to spoil my feelings of waiting for the weekend just because of this terrible situation.
>> CorrectI will think of it positively! ^^
>> CorrectBy the way, I finally got your letter today.
>> CorrectAs soon as I found it from the mailbox, I felt excited.
>> CorrectAfter writhing it, I was so touched.
>> Correct (But, why did you use \"writhing\"? It seems like it has a negative meaning]I like the word of what you wrote on the letter. >> I like the word that you wrote in the letter.
\"Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow!\"
>> CorrectYou always give me good lessons.
>> CorrectRegarding to your letter, there is one thing that I can\'t accept.
>> Regarding your letter, there is one thing that I can\'t accept.I have never thought that you have shortcomings as my teacher.
>> CorrectNot only do you teach me, but you give me energy every morning.
>> You don\'t only teach me, but you give me energy every morning.I hope you are always energetic and positive so that I can get influenced by you in a good way. ^^
>> CorrectHave a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**
>> Correct
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