Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
A happy Monday to you!
I usually wake up at 6:25 AM on weekdays but today, I woke up one hour later than usual.
Last weekend, I set my alarm clock to 7:25 AM and I forgot to set it again for weekdays.
In this case, I have to take a class at home and I will get to work 10 minutes later than my working hours.
Yes, I was late to work today. Hehehe ^^:;
Fortunately, my boss was not at the office so I wasn't caught being late by him.
The start of this week is not that fresh. ^^;;
By the way, here in Korea, it is still cold so I could not go out last weekend.
When I hung out the wash to dry on the roof, as soon as I shake out the laundry, it was frozen instantly.
It was a unique experience. Hehehe
It was negative 18 degrees Celsius and today is negative 14 degrees Celsius.
I really hope this cold weather will pass very soon.
See you Tomorrow! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Are you in the office?
Keep yourself warm ok?
I also have that kind of experience where my alarm didn\'t
really rang on time.
So, I was late too. kkkk
See you again tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> CorrectA happy Monday to you!
>> CorrectI usually wake up at 6:25 AM on weekdays but today, I woke up one hour later than usual.
>> CorrectLast weekend, I set my alarm clock to 7:25 AM and I forgot to set it again for weekdays.
>> CorrectIn this case, I have to take a class at home and I will get to work 10 minutes later than my working hours.
>> CorrectYes, I was late to work today. Hehehe ^^:;
>> CorrectFortunately, my boss was not at the office so I wasn\'t caught being late by him.
>> Fortunately, my boss was not at the office so I wasn\'t caught late by him.
The start of this week is not that fresh. ^^;;
>> CorrectBy the way, here in Korea, it is still cold so I could not go out last weekend.
>> CorrectWhen I hung out the wash to dry on the roof, as soon as I shake out the laundry, it was frozen instantly.
>> CorrectIt was a unique experience. Hehehe
>> CorrectIt was negative 18 degrees Celsius and today is negative 14 degrees Celsius.
>> CorrectI really hope this cold weather will pass very soon.
>> CorrectSee you Tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct
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