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2016-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher, A happy Monday to you! I usually wake up at 6:25 AM on weekdays but today, I woke up one hour later than usual. Last weekend, I set my alarm clock to 7:25 AM and I forgot to set it again for weekdays. In this case, I have to take a class at home and I will get to work 10 minutes later than my working hours. Yes, I was late to work today. Hehehe ^^:; Fortunately, my boss was not at the office so I wasn't caught being late by him. The start of this week is not that fresh. ^^;; By the way, here in Korea, it is still cold so I could not go out last weekend. When I hung out the wash to dry on the roof, as soon as I shake out the laundry, it was frozen instantly. It was a unique experience. Hehehe It was negative 18 degrees Celsius and today is negative 14 degrees Celsius. I really hope this cold weather will pass very soon. See you Tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Are you in the office? Keep yourself warm ok? I also have that kind of experience where my alarm didn\'t really rang on time. So, I was late too. kkkk See you again tomorrow! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher,  >> CorrectA happy Monday to you! >> CorrectI usually wake up at 6:25 AM on weekdays but today, I woke up one hour later than usual. >> CorrectLast weekend, I set my alarm clock to 7:25 AM and I forgot to set it again for weekdays. >> CorrectIn this case, I have to take a class at home and I will get to work 10 minutes later than my working hours. >> CorrectYes, I was late to work today. Hehehe ^^:; >> CorrectFortunately, my boss was not at the office so I wasn\'t caught being late by him. >> Fortunately, my boss was not at the office so I wasn\'t caught late by him. The start of this week is not that fresh. ^^;; >> CorrectBy the way, here in Korea, it is still cold so I could not go out last weekend. >> CorrectWhen I hung out the wash to dry on the roof, as soon as I shake out the laundry, it was frozen instantly. >> CorrectIt was a unique experience. Hehehe >> CorrectIt was negative 18 degrees Celsius and today is negative 14 degrees Celsius. >> CorrectI really hope this cold weather will pass very soon. >> CorrectSee you Tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct

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