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Good morning, Teacher! Here in Seoul, snow is falling but luckily, the temperature already came back to normal so I don't need to worry about icy roads. According to the weather forecast, winter will end after this cold wave and we can greet spring very soon. It seems like a change in the weather is really spectacular. Because of the cold weather, I have been unable to ventilate my house for a long time. If I hold the windows open in my house when I leave for work, I might face freezing trouble in water supply pipes and boiler system. As I heard from news, many households encountered this problem and they are shaking with the cold weather. That problem is such a headache. I also experienced a freezing pipe with my laundry machine last weekend so I had to pull the pipe out and put it into warm water to melt ice inside. It was my first time to face this kind of situation so I was shocked. As you know, I am renting my house so it is not mine. In this case, if I break something such as a boiler or built-in furniture, the person who has to take a responsibility is me. Suddenly, the story wandered from the subject. HEHEHE Anyway, you also need to keep yourself warmer not to catch a cold. ^^ Have a nice day! ^^**

Oh my dear [이름], I\'m so glad knowing that your temperature there is already going back to it\'s normal state. Thinking of the complications I may experience, I already give up living in a country with winter season. Don\'t worry much about me. I can already recover even the colds is just about to start. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectHere in Seoul, snow is falling but luckily, the temperature already came back to normal so I don\'t need to worry about icy roads. >> CorrectAccording to the weather forecast, winter will end after this cold wave and we can greet spring very soon. >> CorrectIt seems like a change in the weather is really spectacular. >> CorrectBecause of the cold weather, I have been unable to ventilate my house for a long time. >> CorrectIf I hold the windows open in my house when I leave for work, I might face freezing trouble in water supply pipes and boiler system. >> CorrectAs I heard from news, many households encountered this problem and they are shaking with the cold weather. >> CorrectThat problem is such a headache. >> CorrectI also experienced a freezing pipe with my laundry machine last weekend so I had to pull the pipe out and put it into warm water to melt ice inside. >> CorrectIt was my first time to face this kind of situation so I was shocked. >> CorrectAs you know, I am renting my house so it is not mine. >> CorrectIn this case, if I break something such as a boiler or built-in furniture, the person who has to take a responsibility is me. >> CorrectSuddenly, the story wandered from the subject. HEHEHE >> CorrectAnyway, you also need to keep yourself warmer not to catch a cold. ^^ >> CorrectHave a nice day! ^^** >> Correct