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학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
Just like what you guessed, I feel really tired today.
Maybe, Wednesday gives me tiredness.
Even though I had a sweet sleep last night, it seem like I lose my concentration when it is Wednesday.
I wish I would work only for 4 days a week. ^^;;
Actually, when it comes to working hours, Korea is at the top of the ranking in OECD members.
If we count overtime into working hours, we might exceed the average of the other countries in OECD.
Our standard working hours are 40 hours a week but people are working a lot more than it.
I don't think that the efficiency will be better when working hours are longer.
I think our company really need to break this bad custom so that people can get relaxed lives at least at night.
Well, somehow, I am blessed because at least I can leave work on time every day. ^^;;
That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I know that your working hours really give you a headache.
But as you mentioned, you are still lucky because you can still go home
on time. Other people go home later than their supposed to be finished time.
So, don\'t lose your energy!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectJust like what you guessed, I feel really tired today.
>> CorrectMaybe, Wednesday gives me tiredness.
>> CorrectEven though I had a sweet sleep last night, it seem like I lose my concentration when it is Wednesday.
>> Even though I had a sweet sleep last night, it seems like I lose my concentration when it is Wednesday. I wish I would work only for 4 days a week. ^^;;
>> I wish I could work only for four days a week.Actually, when it comes to working hours, Korea is at the top of the ranking in OECD members.
>> CorrectIf we count overtime into working hours, we might exceed the average of the other countries in OECD.
>> CorrectOur standard working hours are 40 hours a week but people are working a lot more than it.
>> Our standard working hours is for 40 hours a week but people are working a lot more than it. I don\'t think that the efficiency will be better when working hours are longer.
>> CorrectI think our company really need to break this bad custom so that people can get relaxed lives at least at night.
>> Correct Well, somehow, I am blessed because at least I can leave work on time every day. ^^;;
>> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow!
>> Correct
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