Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
A good day to you!
I am going to submit my composition about the subject below.
*Essay
Imagine that you have found a great apartment to share, but your new roommate doesn’t want any pets.
In this case, I won't force to persuade my roommate to understand my situation.
If someone really doesn't like any pets, living with a pet will be a terrible situation for that person.
Some people are even allergic to some pets.
If we ignore individual traits and just have our own way, how can we get along with others?
If we really want to raise a pet, we'd rather live alone freely.
As we know, we can't eat our cake and have it too.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for explaining your thoughts well.
In my own opinion, other people can change when they are
exposed to pets.
I\'m one of them, but not yet totally changed. kkk
Have a good Thursday!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectA good day to you!
>> Correct
I am going to submit my composition about the subject below.
>> Correct*EssayImagine that you have found a great apartment to share, but your new roommate doesn’t want any pets.In this case, I won\'t force to persuade my roommate to understand my situation.
>> CorrectIf someone really doesn\'t like any pets, living with a pet will be a terrible situation for that person.
>> CorrectSome people are even allergic to some pets.
>> CorrectIf we ignore individual traits and just have our own way, how can we get along with others?
>> CorrectIf we really want to raise a pet, we\'d rather live alone freely.
>> CorrectAs we know, we can\'t eat our cake and have it too.
>> Correct
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