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2016-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It is the start of your holiday today! Maybe, you are walking on air now. It seems like you already finished going on a trip and your voice got back to normal. I envy you and I am also excited for you. I hope you will have wonderful time during your holiday! ^^ See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^It seems like you are also excited for me to have my holiday. I don\'t really consider it as holiday. It is for me to regain my strength as well as my passion.^^ I think it would also be necessary for you to take a break. Right?^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectIt is the start of your holiday today! >> CorrectMaybe, you are walking on air now. >> CorrectIt seems like you already finished going on a trip and your voice got back to normal. >> CorrectI envy you and I am also excited for you. >> CorrectI hope you will have wonderful time during your holiday! ^^ >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> Correct

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