Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
It is the start of your holiday today!
Maybe, you are walking on air now.
It seems like you already finished going on a trip and your voice got back to normal.
I envy you and I am also excited for you.
I hope you will have wonderful time during your holiday! ^^
See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^It seems like you are also excited for me to have my holiday.
I don\'t really consider it as holiday.
It is for me to regain my strength as well as my passion.^^
I think it would also be necessary for you to take a break. Right?^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectIt is the start of your holiday today!
>> CorrectMaybe, you are walking on air now.
>> CorrectIt seems like you already finished going on a trip and your voice got back to normal.
>> CorrectI envy you and I am also excited for you.
>> CorrectI hope you will have wonderful time during your holiday! ^^
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow!
>> Correct
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