Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, Teacher!
Today, I have been very occupied with my tasks so I can't find my time to make a composition.
Sentences that I submit below are what we talked about during our class.
I will replace a new composition with them. ^^:;
Please kindly check if there are no mistakes.
See you! ^^
-What are you up to today?
-It is much better for me to repeat movies.
-What is one movie that you can repeat over and over again?
-Is there something that you can repeat over and over again?
-It was just like puppy love.
-I watched it for the third time.
-It is more on realization.
-My laptop was turned on overnight.
-Reliability of internet connection is only 80%
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I already expected that you were busy again at work since
you were not able to submit your composition in the morning.
Are you also going to be busy today? It\'s Wednesday and I hope
that when I talk to you, I can give you energy before you think
that it is Wednesday. I don\'t want you to lose your energy.
Have a great day ahead!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
>> Correct.Today, I have been very occupied with my tasks so I can\'t find my time to make a composition.
>> Correct.Sentences that I submit below are what we talked about during our class.
>> The sentences that I submit below are the things we talked about during our class. (You already mentioned that they are sentences so they are already specific. Better use \"the things\" instead of \"what\".)I will replace a new composition with them. ^^:;
>> I will replace a new composition using them. (Vocabulary vs. preposition)Please kindly check if there are no mistakes.
>> Correct.See you! ^^
>> Correct.-What are you up to today?
>> Correct.-It is much better for me to repeat movies.
>> Correct.-What is one movie that you can repeat over and over again?
>> Correct.-Is there something that you can repeat over and over again?
>> Correct.-It was just like puppy love.
>> Correct.-I watched it for the third time.
>> Correct.-It is more on realization.
>> Correct.-My laptop was turned on overnight.
>> Correct.-Reliability of internet connection is only 80%
>> The reliability of the internet connection is only 80%.
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