Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
Good afternoon!
Are you taking a good rest now?
I can imagine your smiling face.
Just like you, I really want to go home early and take some rest to recover from my cold.
It is well known that taking a medicine doesn't work on a cold.
All I can do now is just drink a lot of water and take enough rest.
I hope the remaining days of this week will pass very fast. ^^
Have a nice holiday! ^^**
*Review
Can I have my phone checked?
The dog was drooling at the mouth.
I feel drooling.
I will go on a one-day trip.
The guy will ask for the hand of the girl friend.
The tradition is fading.
If I did it, it is really going to be messy.
They will have their hair colored again.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!^^
I know that I don\'t want to be that excited for the holidays.
It is my habit not to think about it because I am really afraid
of what\'s going to happen.
Anyhow, I hope that you can really recover from your colds
for you to be able to enjoy your holidays, too.
See you later [이름]!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> CorrectGood afternoon!
>> CorrectAre you taking a good rest now?
>> CorrectI can imagine your smiling face.
>> Correct (Why???? kkk)Just like you, I really want to go home early and take some rest to recover from my cold.
>> CorrectIt is well known that taking a medicine doesn\'t work on a cold.
>> Correct (Yeah. I remember you telling me that taking a rest is the best medicine for colds)All I can do now is just drink a lot of water and take enough rest.
>> CorrectI hope the remaining days of this week will pass very fast. ^^
>> I hope the remaining days of this week will pass very fast. (Article usage)Have a nice holiday! ^^**
>> Correct*Review Can I have my phone checked?
>> CorrectThe dog was drooling at the mouth.
>> The dog was drooling. (Drooling already has the idea that it is happening in our mouth so we don\'t have to put that one anymore.)I feel drooling.
>> CorrectI will go on a one-day trip.
>> CorrectThe guy will ask for the hand of the girl friend.
>> The guy will ask for the hands of his girlfriend. (hand-hands: part of the expression)The tradition is fading.
>> CorrectIf I did it, it is really going to be messy.
>> If I did it, it would really be messy. (If + past verb, would/could)They will have their hair colored again.
>> Correct
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