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2016-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher, Good afternoon! Are you taking a good rest now? I can imagine your smiling face. Just like you, I really want to go home early and take some rest to recover from my cold. It is well known that taking a medicine doesn't work on a cold. All I can do now is just drink a lot of water and take enough rest. I hope the remaining days of this week will pass very fast. ^^ Have a nice holiday! ^^** *Review Can I have my phone checked? The dog was drooling at the mouth. I feel drooling. I will go on a one-day trip. The guy will ask for the hand of the girl friend. The tradition is fading. If I did it, it is really going to be messy. They will have their hair colored again.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!^^ I know that I don\'t want to be that excited for the holidays. It is my habit not to think about it because I am really afraid of what\'s going to happen. Anyhow, I hope that you can really recover from your colds for you to be able to enjoy your holidays, too. See you later [이름]! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> CorrectGood afternoon! >> CorrectAre you taking a good rest now? >> CorrectI can imagine your smiling face. >> Correct (Why???? kkk)Just like you, I really want to go home early and take some rest to recover from my cold. >> CorrectIt is well known that taking a medicine doesn\'t work on a cold. >> Correct (Yeah. I remember you telling me that taking a rest is the best medicine for colds)All I can do now is just drink a lot of water and take enough rest. >> CorrectI hope the remaining days of this week will pass very fast. ^^ >> I hope the remaining days of this week will pass very fast. (Article usage)Have a nice holiday! ^^** >> Correct*Review Can I have my phone checked? >> CorrectThe dog was drooling at the mouth. >> The dog was drooling. (Drooling already has the idea that it is happening in our mouth so we don\'t have to put that one anymore.)I feel drooling. >> CorrectI will go on a one-day trip. >> CorrectThe guy will ask for the hand of the girl friend. >> The guy will ask for the hands of his girlfriend. (hand-hands: part of the expression)The tradition is fading. >> CorrectIf I did it, it is really going to be messy. >> If I did it, it would really be messy. (If + past verb, would/could)They will have their hair colored again. >> Correct 

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