Composition

Dear Teacher, Good morning! First of all, thanks for informing me a good remedy to recover from my cold. After our class, I ate three mandarin oranges. I hope it really will work on me. ^^ That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^** *Essay To convince my friend that it is important to open a savings account and save money, I will tell him our her the importance of doing that. 1. When we are old, we don't have a ability to make money. In this case, what we can rely on? If we don't have enough money, our lives in old age will not be bright. Do you want to regret your old days in the future? 2. During our lives, there is a possibility to encounter unexpected situations. If the situation is really related to a monetary problem, we will feel desperate without savings. There is no harm in preparing for something in advance because our lives are long.

Happy Thursday once again, [이름]!^^ I am really hoping that you can already recuperate and that colds will really go away. It is necessary for you to have good body condition since you are about to face another chapter of your life. You know what I mean right? kkk Please try to have more mandarin oranges. Get well soon!~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> CorrectGood morning! >> CorrectFirst of all, thanks for informing me a good remedy to recover from my cold. >> First of all, thanks for informing me about a good remedy to recover from my cold.After our class, I ate three mandarin oranges. >> CorrectI hope it really will work on me. ^^ >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**>> Correct*Essay To convince my friend that it is important to open a savings account and save money, I will tell him our her the importance of doing that. >> To convince my friend that it is important to open a savings account and save money, I will tell him or her the importance of doing that. 1. When we are old, we don\'t have a ability to make money. >> When we are old, we wouldn\'t have the ability to make money. In this case, what we can rely on? >> In this case, what can we rely on?If we don\'t have enough money, our lives in old age will not be bright. >> CorrectDo you want to regret your old days in the future? >> Correct2. During our lives, there is a possibility to encounter unexpected situations. >> CorrectIf the situation is really related to a monetary problem, we will feel desperate without savings. >> CorrectThere is no harm in preparing for something in advance because our lives are long. >> Correct