Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
Good morning again!
Did you take a supplementary battery of your mobile phone?
If you let me choose one thing that I can't omit when I go on a trip, it will be emphatically the supplementary battery.
How about you?
What is one thing that you can't live without when you take a trip?
Wait! You also should take emergency drugs to keep you and your friend such as mosquitocide, digestive medicine and anti-inflammatory and so on.
When it comes to preparation and precaution, It is always good for you to care about it too much. Hehehe! ^^
Always take care and have a nice trip!
See you next Thursday!
강사 첨삭
My dear, [이름]!
Thank you so much for the thought you shared
and the concern you showed!^^I am very touched because of your thoughtfulness.
Now, I hope that your meeting will end in a good way.
I believe you will have a happy wedding soon!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
>> Correct. Good morning again!
>> Correct. Did you take a supplementary battery of your mobile phone?
>> Correct. If you let me choose one thing that I can\'t omit when I go on a trip, it will be emphatically the supplementary battery.
>> Correct. (Actually, I lost my extra battery before. So sad.How about you?
>> Correct. What is one thing that you can\'t live without when you take a trip?
>> Correct. (I must not forget my ponytail and handkerchief!)Wait! You also should take emergency drugs to keep you and your friend such as mosquitocide, digestive medicine and anti-inflammatory and so on.
>> Wait! You also should take emergency drugs as mosquitocide, digestive medicine and anti-inflammatory and so on to keep you and your friend from having problems such. (Don\'t worry, my dear, I have always been prepared for those things!^^)When it comes to preparation and precaution, It is always good for you to care about it too much. Hehehe! ^^
>> Correct. Always take care and have a nice trip!
>> Correct. See you next Thursday!
>> Correct.
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