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2016-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good afternoon, Teacher! Our holiday is finished and we have to go back to our ordinary lives. Somehow, I am not accustomed to working for now. During my holiday, I always woke up at 9 am. I didn't need to set my alarm clock and just got up when I want to wake up. I felt strange when I got up at 6:30 am this morning. The only consolation is that I don't have tasks in the office because our Chinese coworker will get back next Monday. The place here is warm and my stomach is full so I feel a little drowsy. I somehow want to be lazy again. ^^;; I think I need some time to go back to normal. Are you also like that? See you! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Holiday is really over and we have to wake ourselves up for the coming days. We have to work again but I still feel lucky because I was able to take a rest for the long holidays. I just have to condition my body to wake up early again, too!^^kkk Have a great day ahead!^^~~~Teacher Erine~~ Good afternoon, Teacher! >> CorrectOur holiday is finished and we have to go back to our ordinary lives. >> CorrectSomehow, I am not accustomed to working for now. >> Somehow, I am not accustomed to working by now. During my holiday, I always woke up at 9 am. >> CorrectI didn\'t need to set my alarm clock and just got up when I want to wake up. >> I didn\'t need to set my alarm clock and just got up when I wanted to wake up. I felt strange when I got up at 6:30 am this morning. >> CorrectThe only consolation is that I don\'t have tasks in the office because our Chinese coworker will get back next Monday. >> Correct The place here is warm and my stomach is full so I feel a little drowsy. >> Correct I somehow want to be lazy again. ^^;; >> Correct I think I need some time to go back to normal. >> Correct Are you also like that? >> Correct (Yes, indeed)See you! ^^** >> Correct 

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