Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
Today, we suddenly talked about high-heeled shoes in our class and I realized that I am not aware of words about shoes.
As an extension of our class, I am going to make a few sentences regarding shoes below.
1. I don't usually wear shoes with heels higher than 4 cm.
2. I like wearing rubber shoes.
3. I prefer to wear low cut shoes.
4. I have my heels changed.
5. I have my shoes shined.
6. The soles of shoes are very slippery.
By the way, I could see you having cold symptoms.
I know you will take care of yourself well but I'd like to make a request for looking after your health again.
Take a good rest and see you on Monday! ^^**
강사 첨삭
[이름], happy Friday!
Oh yeah, I think I am about to have colds. But don\'t you worry, I will be OK.^^
I just need to take my vitamins again.kkk
Thank you for the concern. I hope you will have maybe an
ordinary yet wonderful weekend!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct.Today, we suddenly talked about high-heeled shoes in our class and I realized that I am not aware of words about shoes.
>> Correct.As an extension of our class, I am going to make a few sentences regarding shoes below.
>> Correct.1. I don\'t usually wear shoes with heels higher than 4 cm.
>> Correct.2. I like wearing rubber shoes.
>> Correct.3. I prefer to wear low cut shoes.
>> Correct.4. I have my heels changed.
>> Correct.5. I have my shoes shined.
>> Correct. or I have my shoes shone.6. The soles of shoes are very slippery.
>> The soles of the shoes are very slippery.By the way, I could see you having cold symptoms.
>> Correct.I know you will take care of yourself well but I\'d like to make a request for looking after your health again.
>> Correct.Take a good rest and see you on Monday! ^^**
>> Correct.
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