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2016-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! Today, we suddenly talked about high-heeled shoes in our class and I realized that I am not aware of words about shoes. As an extension of our class, I am going to make a few sentences regarding shoes below. 1. I don't usually wear shoes with heels higher than 4 cm. 2. I like wearing rubber shoes. 3. I prefer to wear low cut shoes. 4. I have my heels changed. 5. I have my shoes shined. 6. The soles of shoes are very slippery. By the way, I could see you having cold symptoms. I know you will take care of yourself well but I'd like to make a request for looking after your health again. Take a good rest and see you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

[이름], happy Friday! Oh yeah, I think I am about to have colds. But don\'t you worry, I will be OK.^^ I just need to take my vitamins again.kkk Thank you for the concern. I hope you will have maybe an ordinary yet wonderful weekend!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> Correct.Today, we suddenly talked about high-heeled shoes in our class and I realized that I am not aware of words about shoes. >> Correct.As an extension of our class, I am going to make a few sentences regarding shoes below. >> Correct.1. I don\'t usually wear shoes with heels higher than 4 cm. >> Correct.2. I like wearing rubber shoes. >> Correct.3. I prefer to wear low cut shoes. >> Correct.4. I have my heels changed. >> Correct.5. I have my shoes shined. >> Correct. or I have my shoes shone.6. The soles of shoes are very slippery. >> The soles of the shoes are very slippery.By the way, I could see you having cold symptoms. >> Correct.I know you will take care of yourself well but I\'d like to make a request for looking after your health again. >> Correct.Take a good rest and see you on Monday! ^^** >> Correct.

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