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2016-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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A happy Monday to us! I finished reviewing my recording and I am going to make a composition regarding our history. 1. We used to be colonized by Japan. 2. Japan has not apologized to victims who were suffered in the Period of Japanese Occupancy. 3. Korea and Japan are fighting about the issue of 'The Sexual Slaver'. 4. We should clean up the vestiges of Japanese imperialism. 5. In contrast with Germany, Japan which is one of the Axis powers has not admitted its mistake. 6. History is a mirror of the future. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! P.S.: It seems like you also looked tired today. I hope you won't have a Monday sickness. ^^** Have a great day!

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]! I am getting more interested in history when we talk about it. Even though I am not really into it, I just feel that I want to know more when you tell me stories like this. Thank you! We\'ll have more next time!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ A happy Monday to us! >> CorrectI finished reviewing my recording and I am going to make a composition regarding our history. >> Correct1. We used to be colonized by Japan. >> Correct or >> We were colonized by Japan.2. Japan has not apologized to victims who were suffered in the Period of Japanese Occupancy. >> Japan has not apologized to victims who suffered in the Period of Japanese Occupancy. 3. Korea and Japan are fighting about the issue of \'The Sexual Slaver\'. >> Korea and Japan are fighting about the issue about \'The Sexual Slavery\'.4. We should clean up the vestiges of Japanese imperialism. >> Correct5. In contrast with Germany, Japan which is one of the Axis powers has not admitted its mistake. >> In contrast with Germany, Japan, which is one of the Axis powers, has not admitted its mistake. 6. History is a mirror of the future. >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> CorrectP.S.: It seems like you also looked tired today. >> CorrectI hope you won\'t have a Monday sickness. ^^** >> Correct (kk Yes I was!^^ But don\'t worry, I was just hungry!^^ Have a great day! >> Correct

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